Okay so I guess I should tell you all that I have updated The Grand Masked Ball and I have finished updating it over Spring Break. I changed it in a dramatic way where some vital information has been washed away and been replaced with the mind set I have been. When I read it before just...nope. Didn't like how I wrote it back in like grade 8. All the spelling mistakes and tearing apart grammar and what not...made me cringe. So now that I am no longer in grade 8 and actually have learned an outline of a STORY. This short-story is one of my prides and joys and if you don't like it well...whatever we all have our own opinions and like Thumper says "If you can't say anything nice, don't say nottin' at all." I do enjoy the good productive criticism but common, we didn't need to bring down a grade 8 and her first time taking a sab at this years ago. Hate if you want but just be mature about.

So now if you do actually enjoy it, I will have to see if I am going to add on to it. See if I have time with school and such but I would love to just sit and write and write about this so we shall see.