Just sort of started writing this story and it just grew and grew out of control into what it is now. The plot of this story is based a lot on that of the original Nanoha series, but branches off into something else towards the middle. But I thought it would be fun to write it from a slightly older prospective with a different character view (shonen, I think there needs to be more maho type shonen out there). I personally do not believe that this story can be fully estimated without reading up to chapter 4 or 5. If I get some reviews I will post some of the other chapters