![]() I came to read.But ill stay to write :D omg. ." Like my drawing? :D its kewl! . x3 o-o i am NEW . so dont be all like...'omg..newb w" ' . kuzz it get you no where.Im going to need some mail on what you think of my preview and if i should continue it or do something else... WELL ITS BELOW X3 READ IT! (pwease o-o ) HEADS UP! : This Angel is a scene teen :D so dont freak when you SEE SOME STUFF! Tell me what you want to read about. ill type it out.Tell me how long you want it to be.Ill exaggerate it.i spelled that wrong didnt I? tell me what you DESIRE. Ill write i with a passion. your reading wish is my writeing COMMAND. so let me hear it! ive got the skillz to do it! heres a preview o the story ill be working on soon...: - It was that feeling.The one that everybody gets.You know,the one where you feel like dying?Yeah.THAT ONE.Except much,MUCH worse. I watched silently as his prone male figure shimmered and evaporated in front of me.And that was all i could do; stare.I wanted to scream.Cry,break down and rip out my multicolored hair.But no.I just stared.The feeling...It's unbearable.I'm numb to the bone,I can't feel my feet,my skin was paler than pale.I'm in terrible condition.I'm soaking wet from the continuous sweat,running down my brow to the tip of my nose and onto the cold,hard,tile floor. And like I said,I wanted to cry.But I'm not allowed.Ever since that day...I have;nt been allowed to cry.Not.At.All...My hand reached out,with out my say so,and my foot stepped forward.You can't leave me...Please..You promised me! YOU PROMISED!! I screamed in my head.My face wrinkled,trying to force some tears out of me.I reused.I vowed.But thats all i wanted to do!I mean damnit! I deserved to cry! HE was dissapearing from me!She's not supposed to win!And..and...Oh..FORGET IT. "NO!" I shouted,taking quick steps forward."YOU PROMISED ME!" My pale voice was raspy from the gasping I had been doing while watching him dissolve.He looked down at me,his ruby red eyes swirling with great agony and pure pain.He seemed to be begging me.I continued to move forward.When i reached him i wrapped my pale toned arms around his shimmering self.Or at least I tried.My arms went right through him. His evaporating hand moved to brush the stray hairs out of my pale and worried face.And then he was gone.Like he never existed.I stood,my arms still out stretched as if going to tighten my hold around somebody.Slowly,i fell to my knees,gasping once again.My gloved tight hand reached up and touched my hair gently.It's still there! I quickly stood up and ran to a mirror over the sink on the far right of the old aandoned restroom.Looking at myself i visibly calmed.Taking a slow breath,I turned myself and walked away.My tangerine converse stepping in the puddles of water. - YUPPERZ!! TELL M WHAT YOU THINK!! EVEN IF U DONT LIKE IT I SHALL CONTINUE!! ~luhh ChyAngel. aka TerrorAct. ~ |
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