![]() Dear “Author”, Your inability to write astounds me. How old are you? Nine? I suggest, if that is the case, that you read the ToS and then proceed to leave the site. If not, I pity you and whoever your English teacher is/was. The fact that they have/had to put up with this shit (as I assume your writing style translates over to your school work) is depressing. Maybe you should learn to utilise the technology you have before you or perhaps pick up a book. Books are a good way to learn socially acceptable writing forms. “Twilight” does not count. Also, if one of the following things relates to your “story”, perhaps you should obtain a tutor/and or beta reader: - You fail to use the enter key - You do not know how to capitalise correctly - Your spelling is atrocious - You do not know how to form coherent and cohesive sentences - Character development is sorely lacking logic, aesthetics, thought and/or any OC’s are Mary-Sues and Gary-Stues Also, if your author notes consist of you chatting nonsensically with your many other personalities/characters: stop it. No one cares what goes on in that head of yours. All they do is take up space that could be better put to use developing plot/characters or, perhaps, in your case, nonsensical ramblings with no coherent thought process. Yours Sincerely, Axelx I do not condone: |