Oh, does anyone know what happened to the story UNFORGIVABLE LOVE? (medevillover wrote it...summary: Prince Edward of Marseilles meets Lady Isabella Swan, who is a senior agent for the ISS. Mike the muderer is released from prison and the story escalates from there.) The story is literally GONE!!! If anyone finds it, PM me please!

For my awards of the month, scroll down!

Welcome. My name is Anaryon, though many people call me the editor. I review and offer tips for stories, usually Twilight/New Moon/ Eclipse. I edit all documents, from fanfics to newspapers to school yearbooks. If you get a review from me, trust what I say...it will help in the long run!

I enjoy reading through all fanfiction stories from the vast amount of books I have read. I comment on basically all I read, if I feel that my comments would benefit the author. As to my age, I am younger than you think but seem older than I really am. Enough said?

If you want me to edit your story, tell me the title and your name...no promises, but I will try.

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An issue I've been seeing in most stories I've read is PACE. Don't move too fast or too slowly- it will either confuse of bore your readers. If you tend to move fast, slow down and add more detail. If you are a slow writer, add less detail, but lay on action to move the story faster. Keep a steady pace throughout the story.

Good Luck!

Awards of the Month

Scores are as follows- out of 10:

4- accurate character representations, 2- grammar/spelling, 2- story pace, 2- creativity and imagination

Story awards-

January:

Nonhumor is taken by... Bloodhound, by: AdagioToAWolf, score- 9

Humor is won by... Bellatouille, by: Cookybabe, score- 8

LadyWolf- You have concocted one of the best sequel stories I have ever read. It combines wit, humor, and seriousness. I like how you follow Pierce's plot by add your own style. Excellent ending, though I'm sad it already ended. Nice, even, beautiful pace. Excellent and accurate character representation. Few spelling and grammar issues, so wonderful! I liked all of your plot twists. Interesting and great style...you did well when you wrote Port Caynn and the court at the end. I enjoyed reading about the annoying advocate for the Scanrans (great imagination- Guardswoman and Rogue are enemies, Beka and Rosto are friends...I never would have thought of it!) I look forward to reading your Eragon story.

Cookybabe- So much fun in your story! I like all the food recipes and vocabulary you share with us. Some of the dishes just make my mouth water! Especially, I like how you portrayed each character in their own perfect job in the restaurant! (especially Lauren and Jessica, ha ha) Nice pranks that you came up with. I love your style and pace, even though I think you will kill me with your cliffhangers :). You get full points on creativity and imagination. Love it! Good luck in future chapters...update soon!

December:

Nonhumor is taken by... The Girl with the books, by: scenezz score- 8

Humor is taken by... Boycotts and Barflies, by: vjgm score- 8