Hello,

As I am a newbie of this website and just written my first chapter since many years ago, I wish from you your options on the reviews. If you have any suggestions on how to improve my writing skills, I would be very appreciative.

Anyways, I will update anything on my profile.

- Unownpowers

Wednesday March 22, 2006- I written my first chapter on my first book, The Tool named Haku. I do not expect anything from you. I would be very surprised if I received one review. However, I enjoy written it so far. Expect and update in a week or so.

Thursday March 23, 2006- I am going to remove my story from the website for a few days. Do not worry it will be back up. I am just tidy up some errors I have seen in my book.

Monday June 26, 2006- Sorry for I did not update, ever. I was quiet busy visting my family then going to a music camp for about a week. For now everything is quiet peaceful now so I can be back on writing. Expect a few books to come out in a about a week!

Sunday July 02, 2006- First chapter for my first book! Check it out!

Saturday July 08, 2006- I edited the first chapter (by adding the "second" chapter together.)