Welcome to my fiction. The first story I plan to post is actually one that has been rattling around in my head in various forms for about 10 years now. It started out as kind of a short story, got combined with another short story idea I had and is now the first of 5 chapters of what may eventually be a book. I welcome any comments - constructive criticism can only help in the end. included with the first chapter is a Prologue which will be tied in later. hope you enjoy it. |