We can't be friends if you think Napoleon Dynamite is not a great movie.

I took a quick break from my iron supplements (yes, I'm anemic) and now I feel like shit.

*drinks soju, slams glass on table and quotes Freddie Mercury* "I'll fucking do it, darling."

"Communication's a two-way street, pal. You see this? That's the 'Send' button."
- Qrow Branwen

Thou hath no idea how important character development is to thy story's plot.

Author's Notes/Updates:

Death Note: The Unwritten

- I'm revamping some stuff I've previously uploaded but I really really will try to update. I'm thinking about bringing all the volumes into one label instead of uploading them separately idk. Please read, rate and review. Tell me how it is, or if there is anything not so good about it.

- Currently writing: Chapter 13

- Estimated day of update (may change): I really don't know ~(@_@)~

- Things to look forward to next chapter: L's first step to his legendary career and his departure from The Wammy's House. Til next time!

- So much thanks to @PorcelainPuppetLady, @nofreakingway, @Sierra, and @DreamHopeLive for your feedback! I really need them for story improvements so thank you. :)

- While writing this, I've been listening a lot to: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJuLrZVbzq8

Treasure Planet: Their Promise of Flight and Freedom

- Currently writing: Chapter 15

- Next chapter: The In-Crowd

- Estimated day of update: as long as it's a Saturday (I love Sabado~)

- While writing this, I've been listening a lot to: xx (the album)

About author:

- Name: Tin

- MBTI type: ISTP (Introverted, Sensing, Thinking, Perceiving)

- Zodiac sign: Scorpio

- Lefty or righty: Righty

- Can't stop listening to: LET'S KILL THIS LOVE!!

- There's nothing really interesting about me. I write simply because I want to write.

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Updates whenever not busy with life.

My Take on the 'Ten Commandments of Fanfiction':

1. Thou shalt have no other canon but Canon. (do not glorify the inevitable Deus Ex Machina, nor warp established canon and incorporate unfit story elements for thine own satisfaction; however, fix fics, AUs, and/or crossovers are all considerable Canon of thine own take in thy fanfic as long as they are executed properly; literally do research on thy Canon)

2. Thou shalt not take the name of thy original writers in vain. (respect intellectual property not of thine own; insert thy disclaimers wherever one can but be smart in writing them; give thine original writers credit where credit is due)

3. Thou shalt remember thy writing day to keep fanfiction updated. (maintain a regular update schedule and make sure to finish the story that thou hath started; thou hath been given the responsibility to not leave thy readers hanging and disappointed by unresolved story of thee)

4. Thou shalt love and honor thy characters. (this goes for both canon and original characters; do not commit the universal Mortal Sin of Mary Sue, nor kill off or violate characters for no rational cause; give thy characters the closure or characterization they deserve; show, and not tell, thy story to properly flesh-out characters and plot)

5. Thou shalt not disrespect thy readers and fellow authors. (respect the ideas not of thy property, this includes ships; do not bash thy reader's feedbacks but take thy criticisms nicely; do not self-promote in another fanfic unless permitted by said fanfic's author; blackmailing thy reader for reviews in exchange for content is a cheap move)

6. Thou shalt not commit infidelity on proper labeling and rating. (give thy story proper fiction rating, genre(s), warnings, and tags to the important characters; make thy summary coherent and 'sux at summaries' is not an exception)

7. Thou shalt not steal. (plagiarism obviously, as well as claiming someone else's contribution to the story as thine own; always cite thy reference materials)

8. Thou shalt not bear false witness on thy wrong spelling, improper verb tense and grammar, and most importantly spacing. (proofread thy story thoroughly or consult thy beta reader; use proper spacing in between dialogue and scenes for thou hath been gifted an 'Enter' key for a reason; Wall of Text all up in thy face is known to be frustrating to some of thy readers)

9. Thou shalt not covet inserting author's notes wherever thou desire. (be considerable in where thou place thine author's notes because not all of thy readers want their momentum interrupted, nor are some of them even interested to read it in the first place)

10. Thou shalt not covet self-publishing of original version of thy fanfiction in any form. (it's fanfiction, duh. Thou could get in trouble for that, unless thou change a lot of major elements in the story such as renaming thy main characters Anastasia or Christian)

P.S.: You're free to repost but please credit me as OP when you do so.

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