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Joined 04-10-08, id: 1548067, Profile Updated: 05-04-08

About Me =)

Ello all, My name's Izzy but you can call me Yugi, but not the one from Yugi-Oh the one from 'The Tale of Genji'. The name was an idea by Lady C (who is a friend of mine in real life) because we read basically the same books. And I love Yugiri. There's not much to me except I'm a critic in all senses of the word. I'll pounce on your phailure like a stripper does to a pole.

I am currently trying to learn Japanese, French, and Spanish. I'm not like Riyo who wants to be like 'Que tal' and 'Como voce vai' at the same time... (I know those two have no corolation with each other). I've been supporting Riyo and her imaginary dreams for about two years now, I decided to join fanfic to show my good faith and I love it here.

I love fanfics, but right now the only person you'd see on my fav list is Lady C. I'm waiting till summer to read anything else (sorry), Finals are a bitch.

"I am a Spelling Hitler and my troops are not far behind. I’m not so great with grammar and sentence structures, so go ahead and mess up with that. But don’t tlk to mi lyk dis? Mkay?"- Riyo

"I'm the Colonel."- Me


For Your Info...

I have 143 books in my posession

My current favorite song is 'Rio De Janeiro Blues' by Randy Crawford.

My favorite book is 'The Tale of Genji' even though I have yet to finish it.

My favorite genre is Jazz and SHOCK ROCK

My ALL TOP favorite song is Moondance. There is no wrong way to play that song, it’s all good… Plus I play the trombone for this song, it's beautiful. Riyo and I are alike in so many ways dontcha think?


Who Am I?

Currently I reside as Riyo's critique and sometimes Editor. I wouldn't call myself a beta since I beta read nothing of hers. I read it when you read it, and judge it more harshly in PM =)


My FAVE FanFictions

Descriptions of them and my critique of them will go here. Most (all) of them are Lady C's. I'll diversify myself when summer comes kaay~?

Author: Lady Constantine

(1) Anata to Ita Toki: A beautiful yōkai, My thoughts scattered, it was wrong to adulate him like this. He was for one— probably not interested; two— unconscious and three— and most importantly— we shared the same gender. But I loved him still... did I not?

Current Chapter Up: Chapter 3- ...And He Fell From the Apple Tree

Status: (Incomplete)

Critique: It was one of the only shounen-ais that didn't have rape and had a storyline (as far as I could tell), lack of inspiration led her to discontinue it.

Updates: (DISCONTINUED)

(2) Dear September: "Grandfather, are we the Allied or the Axis?" Hadrian silently cursed his niece's unfathomable interrogative nature. At that moment, it was clear where everyone stood on the issue..."The Axis of course."

Current Chapter Up: Chapter 13- A Feast to Divide

Status: (Incomplete)

Critique: With a long drawn out plot, people are getting tired, it was smart of Lady C to make this end sure firely at chapter 20. It's a great story but many people aren't interested in history. I for one, love it and how certain characters are used to explain how World War II really happened and why. Some chapters are fillers, and some are summarized. It's just Riyo being lazy again.

Updates: EVERY WEEK ONCE A WEEK

(3) Delirium Trigger: One shot… That’s all it took to make the pain go away… Just one shot… It would be the poisonous stone he died by, it would be the only crystal he lived by… He only had one shot to make things right… Just one shot…

Current Chapter Up: Chapter 8-Redemption

Status: (Incomplete)

Critque: Some chapters are good, other chapters are like, wtf? And some times (though I have yet to see it), chapters are pure sht. But hey it's a one-shot/drabbalaton. It's not supposed to be ALL good. My suggestion is to read and review only the chapters you like, but read them all. The majority of them are angst and cater to even the darkest of your desires. Lady C's been feeling a little emo lately. Blame Finals.

Updates: EVERY WEEK ONCE A WEEK

(4) Procrustes Edwardo: Whether it was that I could hear voices in my head, or the fact that I had transmuted my own mother. Because of that tumultuous, feelings aroused inside of me I never knew I had. I Edward Elric, had become an avid sadist.

Current Chapter Up: Prologue

Status: (Incomplete)

Critque: There's only one chapter up. But what I've seen of it, it's going to be a great story. She got her inspiration for Dexter, so if you guys love the show you'll probably love this. Now mind you, it's not EXACTLY like Dexter. There are some very important changes.

Updates: VERY SLOWLY: NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE SUPPOSEDLY IN SUMMER

(5) The Day I Felt My Heart Beat: Naraku, in the end I did get my eternal freedom. I am alive, I am real… I am free. As free as the wind… A Kagura POV one-shot that focuses on Kagura’s last moments alive. Slightly KaguraXSesshomaru as they kiss! Enjoy!

Current Chapter Up: Only Chapter

Status: (Complete)

Critque: Mind you, I hate the SessXKagu paring. And it took a heavy amount of goading for her to make me read this fic. But turns out, I like it. I even checked out the manga chapter to see if it went like she 'claimed' it went in the manga. It did. I was flabbergasted and put in my place. I still don't like the paring, but it's a good read for those who do, and those who don't. It doesn't really even focus on the paring, more like a POV of Kagura's death. Which, is what it is EXACTLY.

Updates: IT'S DONE GO READ!


Gawd I need the strength to...

—Create fanfic

—Get a beta reader

—Co-author a fic

—Type up 'Not Afraid...' for Riyo's lazy ass


Favorite Quotes:

A witty saying proves nothing- Voltaire

She got her looks from her father. He's a plastic surgeon- Groucho Marx

The less their ability, the more their conceit.- Ahad Haam

Natural ability without education has more often attained to glory and virtue than education without natural ability- Cicero

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Daughter Dearest by Oriminally reviews
Mini Chapter- "That's the point. He's a man, and a Saiyan. Put the two together and you've got more testosterone than a group of frat boys in a ‘Die Hard' movie. At least watch them! They might be having sex!" GhXVi! Parentals, now with Truanny vision!
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,933 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 5/31/2009 - Published: 4/9/2008 - Gohan, Pan
Delirium Trigger by Oriminally reviews
Chapter 9- Let it be written, that I Major General Olivier Milla Armstrong defeated my cowardly, disgraceful, little brother Alex Louis Armstrong in a battle for our father's inheritance. Make sure you spell my name right and make sure it big letters too.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 8,631 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/15/2008 - Published: 3/5/2008
Dear September by Oriminally reviews
Chapter 14-"Grandfather, are we the Allied or the Axis?" Hadrian silently cursed his niece's unfathomable interrogative nature. At that moment, it was clear where everyone stood on the issue..."The Axis of course."
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 14 - Words: 22,629 - Reviews: 41 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 5/1/2008 - Published: 1/22/2008 - Alphonse E., Edward E.
The Day I Felt My Heart Beat by Oriminally reviews
Naraku, in the end I did get my eternal freedom. I am alive, I am real… I am free. As free as the wind… A Kagura POV one-shot that focuses on Kagura’s last moments alive. Slightly KaguraXSesshomaru as they kiss! Enjoy!
Inuyasha - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,668 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Published: 4/15/2008 - Kagura, Sesshōmaru - Complete
Procrustes Edwardo by Oriminally reviews
Whether it was that I could hear voices in my head, or the fact that I had transmuted my own mother. Because of that tumultuous night feelings aroused inside of me I never knew I had. I Edward Elric, had become an avid sadist.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 6 - Published: 4/8/2008 - Edward E., Maes H.