Ok. So you all have fair warning, I am an overly critical reader, and have a nasty tendency to flinch away from stories that don't even seem to possess the smallest of grammatical knowledge. I also have a tedious little habit of fixing these stories, and sending them back to the original author in hopes that they may learn something. It is my way, as an obsessive compulsive author and reader, of making the literary world a better place. So, I apologize in advance for any critical advice I may deliver. I mean no offense, only to help. Deal with it.