"Can't rise above anything more than three syllables, my dear. Never could." -- Leslie Howard as Sir Percy Blakeney

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Well, one of these days I will finish both my fics. :-)

"Voices" is so close to being done there is just no excuse.

"Changes" still has a ways to go. But I need to hurry up so I can start posting it's sort-of sequel. Oddly enough, I started writing it before I was even midway through "Changes".

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I realize, for the sake of politeness, that it's difficult for some people to constructively criticize. Please try to overcome that particular obstacle. :-) There are times when I get the feeling that one of my chapters isn't quite up to snuff and I need real feedback to tell me:

yes, you coud've done better...here's why or:

don't worry about it...it's all in your head...and here's why.

Constructive criticism will only make me and others better authors...but most especially since I'm trying to become a published one. Tell me about perspectives, too much or too little emotion or introspect, is there too much too soon. etc.

Believe me there is a difference in an outright flame and an objective critique.