![]() Author has written 1 story for Naruto. Real name: Mathieu (you only need to know that much…) Sex: male (Always was and will always be…) Age: 18 years old (Born in 1990…) A little about myself: Well first thing first I am from Canada but more precisely from Quebec. Since I am from Quebec my first language is French than it is English so I am far from perfect in English but I am working on it. It is the first time I writ story so I have no idea how I will do but I do it for fun so I don’t have any problem with criticism as long as it is constructive. Favourite’s anime/manga. (Not in order) -Code Geass -Claymore -Death Note -Naruto -Gantz -Berserk -Bleach -One piece -Samurai Deeper Kyo -Inuyasha My stories: The Power of the King: A Naruto story. What if Naruto had a bloodline limit called Geass which allowed many ability to change his perception of the world and his destiny. For those who know Code Geass the Bloodline limit allow Naruto to use every Geass power but with certain restriction to make it more believable in the Naruto world. The band of twelve: A Naruto story. The story of the numerous character of the Naruto world in a world were the ninja village were never created. How would this affect them? Would their fate still be intertwined? Would they be enemies or allies? What I think of the anime/manga Naruto. (Spoiler) I think that the idea and the world of Naruto is full of potential, the number of fiction on Naruto is proof of that. The plot is good (more or less) for example the bad people, organization, the mystery behind the Uchiha massacre (That was a shock), the bijuu and jutsu, bloodline, war, they are all good really. What I don’t like is the academy which is no better then a civilian academy with more sport… Seriously, they should teach defensive and offensive jutsu at least before throwing them out. The jounin sensei are irresponsible, not just Kakashi. Asuma is lazy and allow is team to do nothing then sent them to the chunin exam… Kurenai is maybe a bit better but she sends a young team to the chunin exam… Gai clearly favours training Lee… Kakashi, well he doesn’t respect his team by wasting there time. I think he think too much of team work and not enough of the mentality needed to be a ninja. Seriously, Sasuke have no loyalty to the village, Sakura doesn’t think about killing, training or learning jutsu, Naruto is loud, ignorant and easily noticeable… You can easily bash every character of the Naruto world… -Naruto = Ignorant, loud, not serious at all… -Sasuke = egomaniac, power angry and I think he has a brother complex… -Sakura = annoying, useless, violent, fan girl… -Kakashi = lazy, irresponsible, incompetent… -Hinata = she faint a lot… she change color a lot… she is too innocent… -Kiba = jerk… -Shino = some personality please… -Kurenai = house wife… -Ino = bitchy, bossy… -Choji = not much personality or speciality… -Shikamaru = lazy, boring… -Asuma = punk… -Sandaime = incompetent old senile… -Jiraiya = incompetent teacher, hopeless pervert… -Tsunade = old drunk who doesn’t have the courage to accept her age… I will stop there but you got the idea… It is a funny story even if the characters have their problem I still read it. But I don’t like the lake of evolution of the character psychologically speaking… Sakura, Sasuke does a little, but not Naruto nor Hinata, Shino, Kakashi… The lake of evolution on Naruto after is training is sad too… Just teach him the technique related to kage bushin and it would be nice, but not a single thing… I don’t see him even faster… Who got the glove? Sakura. Who got the sword? Sasuke. He didn’t have a new weapon… After that he learns big kamikaze technique… Which he can’t use often even the sage mode… In anime and manga normally thing began funny and then more and more serious but this time this transition is done by giving the show to Sasuke… I have nothing against him having some show time but seeing his evolution, big fight and seriousness compare to Naruto it is frustrating… Seriously Sakura has show time against Sasorie, Shikamaru against Hidan, Sasuke against Deidara, Itachi and Killer Bee, Naruto simply do the rasenshurinken on Kakuzu… Nothing more… I still like the show and like the saying goes “Wait and see”… I hope it gets better. Thing I don’t like in fanfiction: -First thing I don’t like yaoi nor does I like Yuri. So please can something be place to allow people to choose if they don’t want to see yaoi in the list? -The big drama about the kyuubi festival, the mob and all… It is a bit too exaggerated… but I am ok with it, it can be useful for certain type of story but to have him always near killed but keeping is love the village and all… It doesn’t make him a saint to my eyes but a masochist… -Super powered Naruto can be funny and a stress relief but I think a certain evolution is needed… -Naruto who is strong at the academy but hid it… It is frustrating… Allow people to see him as a loser to then prove himself… -Sasuke who always call Naruto a loser even if Naruto end up being stronger than Sasuke… and bashing in general. If you want to humiliate a character at least do it a reasonable way… Well all that is my way of seeing thing and I am open to different story and some that have thing I normally don’t like and up pleasantly surprising me. |
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