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Hello, greetings to you all. I am The Critique Creep. I always yearn to be grammatically correct. I cannot stand those who use words so wastefully, and waste readers' time trying to figure out the sentence when the author themselves has not used correct punctuation or grammar. If it is a keyboard mistake, I would understand, but repeatedly, it becomes very annoying. I try to fulfill my job by correcting as many people as possible. If I review on your story, do not take it as offence, but rather as constructive criticism.

Please do not forget to indent or I will chase after you. I mainly only review on animé / manga fanfictions. If you wish to hate me, or despise me, do so and please message me, and we shall engage in a conversation. Have a decent day.


Information That You May Want To Know About Me:

Gender: Male... or Female, fun luck guessing.

Age: 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19... Again, have fun guessing.

Country: Japan

Name: Unknown to you.

Favourite Anime: Code Geass destroys all other anime.

Hobbies: HARHARHAR I love k-pop! _ SHINee, Bigbang, and Super Junior are my favourites. c:


*SHOUTOUT* This is a shout out to all you readers out there who are looking for awesome writing material to read. Please read 'The Character's Death''s stories! They are so beautifully written, and they will make you filled with so much emotion! Like seriously, go and read them; now! Here is the link to their profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4474983/The-Character-s-Death


If you are currently searching for extremely gory content, or simply detest Akito Sohma, (Fruits Basket), you may also resource to sajid . is . awesome (take out the spaces in between the periods), or go to this link: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4296194/sajid-is-awesome


My personality is odd. I am a very dark and sadistic person. I spend most of my time on the computer. I have a low attention span, so I get bored quite easily.


Have a nice day,

Critique Creep.

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Nineteen: A Truth of Red on Blue by hokkyokukou reviews
When they were nineteen, Kuroko was no longer with them. It was an accident that no one liked to talk about. They called it an accident, because the alternative was too horrific. But, when they were nineteen, they realized... it may not have been an accident after all. The red truth was beginning to surface no matter how much they rejected it, so they took it head on... for Kuroko.
Kuroko no Basuke/黒子のバスケ - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Tragedy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 63,642 - Reviews: 292 - Favs: 685 - Follows: 347 - Updated: 1/3/2014 - Published: 4/7/2013 - Kuroko T., Generation of Miracle - Complete
The Gift by The Bloody Red Queen Of Angst reviews
"He entered the dark room slowly, dread bubbling up from every fiber of his being. Yuki knew. He knew it wasn't safe for him here." A short one-shot for my new friend Wild Innocence on her birthday! Disclaimer: Still don't own Fruits Basket and, yep, still looking to own Yuki Sohma! *Oneshot/Complete*
Fruits Basket - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 538 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 7 - Published: 6/21/2013 - Akito S., Yuki S. - Complete
Shark's Agony by byakuyakuchiki16 reviews
Shark has tries to commit suicide. Yuma and friends try to wake him up out of his coma. Will they succeed? What happens when they find out about his past? Astral has the power to sense his current condition, and has the power to wake him up, but it comes with a heavy sacrifice, and it's not counted on Astral. How will this crazy anecdote end? Chapter 3 (4) is up! 7 Chapters to go!
Yu-Gi-Oh! ZEXAL - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,554 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 6/19/2013 - Published: 4/29/2013 - Yuma T., Ryoga K./Shark
Dear Agony by The Bloody Red Queen Of Angst reviews
"He tried to remember why he was doing this. It was clear he wasn't doing this for himself. He wasn't allowed to do anything for his own reasons." This one is a bit different, but just give it a shot and tell me what you think. I am not above begging, so PLEASE review! Disclaimer: I don't own Fruits Basket...and still want to own Yuki Sohma. *Complete*
Fruits Basket - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 18 - Words: 36,141 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 5/27/2013 - Published: 3/16/2013 - Akito S., Yuki S. - Complete
No More PIzza! by sajid.is.awesome reviews
When C.C. drives Lelouch up a wall to his limit, what does he do? Ban C.C. from eating pizza! Her worst night mare! This goes down in a dirty battle between the green haired pizza fanatic witch and the disowned Prince of Britannia, Zero, the C.E.O. of the Black Knights. Dirty tricks, and threats! Rated T for language. First fanfic! Please read and review! Thank you.
Code Geass - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,309 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 5/23/2013 - Published: 5/9/2013 - Lelouch L., C.C.
Kyo's Breakdown Akito's Beatdown by sajid.is.awesome reviews
Kyo is mad. Raging mad. Who's his rage directed at? It can only be one person; Akito. It's a very extremely GRAPHIC story, so if you can't stand it, don't read it. Rated T for heavy prophanities, character death, and graphicness. Read especially if you hate Akito. Read and Review please! :)
Fruits Basket - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,077 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Published: 5/17/2013 - Kyo S., Akito S.
Small Gestures by The Bloody Red Queen Of Angst reviews
"He stood outside her room, arguing with himself. She could cook her own food, and could probably do a better job then he had done. Irritation rose as he found himself very close to just leaving and throwing the stupid thing away. She wouldn't know any different." A fluffy one-shot for my dear friend, A Soulless Poet. Disclaimer: I don't own Fruits Basket. *Oneshot/Complete*
Fruits Basket - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/7/2013 - Kyo S., Tohru H. - Complete
Life With You Is Not Really Living by The Bloody Red Queen Of Angst reviews
"If you cry, it will only make this worse for you…" The voice hissed this promise, inches from Yuki's ear. And things do get worse...much worse. This story is not for the faint of heart...or the Prince Yuki Fan Club! Enjoy! Please read and review as this is my first fic EVER! Let me know what you think! Disclaimer: I don't own Fruits Basket...and want to own Yuki Sohma! *Complete*
Fruits Basket - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,063 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 3/18/2013 - Published: 1/25/2013 - Akito S., Yuki S. - Complete
Chunin Exam Day by Perfect Lionheart reviews
Naruto finds he is flung back in time and must repeat the entire Chunin exam over and over and over, until he gets it right and possibly saves Konoha in the bargain.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 77 - Words: 344,950 - Reviews: 15569 - Favs: 9,660 - Follows: 7,351 - Updated: 5/22/2010 - Published: 12/4/2007 - Naruto U.
Last Time of My Life by Sakura02 reviews
Okita Soji is dying. He knows that now and in time, learns to actually accept the hand that life has dealt him. This is how he deals with the last year of his life.
Peacemaker Kurogane - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 12 - Words: 56,557 - Reviews: 65 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 12/20/2008 - Published: 1/30/2008 - Okita S. - Complete
You're Not Alone reviews
When the five guys; Ray, Kai, Tyson, Kenny, and Max stay up to watch horror movies, a wave of emotions and memories is revived to Kai. He gets an anxiety attack and Ray tries to comfort him, and says a very 'reassuring' statement. First fanfiction, please read. Thank you. Rated T for material, might be a one-shot, depends on if people want me to continue it or not. Thanks.
Beyblade - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,391 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 13 - Published: 6/6/2013 - Kai H., Ray/Rei K.