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Joined 05-27-12, id: 4024324, Profile Updated: 09-02-15
Author has written 1 story for Hunger Games.

About three years ago I just started writing. I needed a creative outlet, and always liked stories. To me it has always been about the story and the ideas, which made me weak on the prose, rhythm, and just plain language skills. I started with FanFiction because I didn’t really want to make up my own whole world, it seemed to me to be so hard. So far all my stories have been in the world of the “Hunger Games”, because I loved the characters so much. One day when I feel strong enough I will make my own world, but for now I am happy where I am.

"The Star Cross Lovers Die"

I have an outline for a story which will cover 3 books. The first book is done it is called "Boy From The Ashes" just a couple more chapters and they I will start the next book "Girl From The Ashes". This is a huge effort and will take most of this year to finish. I hope you all enjoy it.

First chapter finally out for first couple of chapters of "Girl from the Ashes"!


Images used

cave picture source

http://www.flickr.com/photos/eamoncurry/5102619598/

fire picture source


I am working to get better and I need a lot of feed back. I think I can put together a nice story, but writing them is so hard.

I am not a beta. I am not that good yet but if you want my option on a piece just ask and I will try to put together some useful comments on your story

- Several people have been invested in how real the pill was in my "The Cave" maybe I will add a chapter on that. Most people seem to want to believe that the pill is not real. I have to wonder why?

My Stories


"Early Warning"


The Star Cross Lovers Die

My second story. Very sad, Katniss dies at the end of the 74th game, and Peeta is torn apart. While I think this story has some good stuff in it, it is just so sad I can't image it being popular.

Now releasing a chapter a week. Already have 14 chapters written and maybe 6 chapters more to write.


"The Cave"

My first real fan fiction story. Based on Suzanne Collins's "The Hunger Games", in particular the sections were Peeta and Katniss are in the cave. I think the story has a lot of good parts in it but is still a work in progress. I am a fan of Peeta and this story plays him up.

June 18, 2012: Published complete story. Could use some more polish but I like it.

PS: I had some help on first chapter, from a beta. Thank beta. I will include their name later if they want.

Sex talk:
Ok there is some sex in the story, but it is not the central thing. I want you to read the story so I don't want to give anything away, but there is no slot A in tab B stuff here.

Disclaimer

This story was writing for entertainment purposes only and no money was made. The characters contain within belong to Suzanne Collins and publisher.

Reviews:

As of now I think this one is my favorate:

Jamie 6/19/12 . chapter 4

Wow. I have decided you are a butthead. I was laying in my bed about to cry thinking Peeta was dead. Great Story. Not many make me hold my breath and it was a real page turner. Or you know. Whatever you would call that on the internet.

The worst review:

-- All those people who said nothing. I hate that! --

I removed this story for now. Not that it is bad, quite the opposite.


Next story? Ideas?

The trouble with Peeta. (Don't get me wrong I love the guy)

- He lacks any bad features which makes him seem like cardboard as a character.
- We are told he is this great talker and manipulator of people, but he never gets anything meaningful out of Katniss.
- In the stories he just becomes a punching bag for everyone.
- Guys can't relate because frankly he total lacks any passion.

The Cave reviews
Another take on Katniss and Peeta's time in the cave. In this one a gift from Haymitch leads to Katniss and Peeta falling further in love then they ever expected.
Hunger Games - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,618 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 5/12/2017 - Published: 9/12/2012 - Katniss E., Peeta M.