Hey it's Sami and Makayla here. Also know as 27farmers-daughter27 (sami) and monkeylover999 (makayla). We got this idea to criticize our fellow writers stories (hense the name Criticizing Our Fellow Writers) We got this idea from Fanfic Critic. So just send us a PM asking us to read you story and we will criticize it. We aren't too mean about it. We are also making a website for our little "Business" It's: So please send us in stories to criticize! We aren't really mean about it. Thanks.

Some (somewhat) important info:

You can contact us by sending us a PM or emailing us at criticizingourfellowwriters@gmail.com

You can also PM, Makayla or Sami.

Sami's Username: 27farmers-daughter27

Makayla's Username: monkeylover999

You can PM us at these accounts, this account, or our email.

If you want to learn more about a specific one of us, go to that person's profile:

Sami's Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4731635/27farmers-daughter27

Makayla's Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4840580/monkeylover999

Check out our website:

Our First Criticizing!

Sami: Howdy. So our first criticizing is Bonnibella by ItsOurTime

Makayla: Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9266570/1/Bonnibella

Sami: Y'all might wanna read the story to understand a bit more. Anyways, I like the story, a nice little romantic story. Even though Fubblegum isn't our favorite couple, we still liked the story.

Makayla: But...

Sami: It was a good story, it just seemed a little rushed. There wasn't as much detail as I thought there could be. Those were the only faults I could find. I liked the story, especially the whole Marceline her demon god sister thing.

Makayla: Yeah, I liked that. Anyways, good story. Just maybe next time put in a tiny bit more detail.

Sami: So thanks for watchin'/listenin'/readin'.

Both: Bye!