I'm from Mexico and I lived here all my life (except vacations and last year), so my first language is Spanish and I actually write mostly in spanish. But fanfiction... I think English slang is perfect for it.

So, if you find any grammar mistakes tell me so I can correct them.

I have a thing against Mary-Sue ('rbody has a thing against Mary-Sue), OCxCannon specially when that pairing is Out Of Character, and the "chat dialogue" kind of redaction.

If it isn't obvious enough, I have a thing against twilight too.

Things that could help:

Mary-Sue test

Character development by linawifeofL

Rehab for Roleplayers By salshep (It has seven parts if you count the introduction)

If you're writing a FanFiction, stick to the character's personality no matter what. Do it for the kittens.

Watch this :D

Listen to this :3