Hi all I am an avid FF reader however I find myself a poor writer I get frustrated by poor writing witch is really bad when the idea behind it is good normally I try to write out my ideas but none have ever made it to this site this idea was too good not to share and I hope it gets taken up so THE Gamer has set up a alternet world for adventuring in with friends set up as an RPG of course when he gets the idea for a alpha test one of the aspects of this world was always be being able to go and play in their sleep using the time dilation feature he sets his game powers to find some people to try say 3 or 4 people but as his powers are basicley admin by GAIA who is a goddess the people that get picked are ones that will have pivotal roles in their worlds are in distress at that time and are expeanceing emotional upheaveal try to get them at about the same age when they start (you can pick who you like the ones I chose are Xander, nautro, Harry Potter, and Talor Herbert all at about the age of 5) Naruto is kicked out of the orphanage and attacked Xander is beat up by his dad for the first time Harry learns his name and is beat up and starved talors mum dies (I picked this early for plot purpose you don't have to) the levels and things learned don't carry over to the real world at first so they all think its a dream I want their to remain a sepration between the game and reality with slow bleed through starting with them being able to communicate while awake whitch is when they relise it wasn't a dream this should wait for years with them starting at lvl1 every nite until it is before the bleed through starts one nite is about one week and a brand new adventure with dream friends exploring and talking to locals and sharing lives the bleed through happens because their respective gaias start sincing when the game world gamer power enables the com between worlds the reason I want the bleed through to be slow is because when they get respective world powers they bring them into the game world and teach each other when the com is active they no longer start a new every nite their progess in lvling is saved and The Gamer is starting to invite other people into his gameworld our heros don't find that out until much later but they do start to find out that if they train in the real world they can gain powers from each other in the real world with them eventulay gaining the gamer power however when they gain it they start at lvl 1 in the real world with only skills they have trained IN THAT WROLD at a certen point they can visit each other and when they go to the Gamerworld while awake and in their phical bodies they sinc up with their game avatr whitch includes their invorites do what you want after this point that's as far as I've got |
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