I love Harry Potter THG Divergent Delirium etc but I made this account in order to write a divergent fanfic as I have so many criticisms of existing divergent fanfics (no offence). E.g. grammatical errors, lack of proof reading, characters not making realistic decisions, too much "oh tris I love you" all the time, al still being alive, tris making friends with new initiates, tris training new initiates, eric being nice to tris, tris getting everyone to call her "six" and the list goes on. Please enjoy.