![]() Guide: 1. Update: A NOTE: The section of "What I despise in stories" has been updated to further explain why I feel that way and I have also made a point to try and add some tips of how a writer can avoid some of these dreadful writing woes. If you don't wish to read a rant of my thoughts and feelings on writing then please just skip to that section and take a look, maybe some of those tips will help if you're looking to improve on your writing. o uo 02-07-2015 Please Note: Update: Wow, so the last time I bothered to update this page was a little over a year and a half ago? Geeze, so much- and yet so little, has happened since then. Needless to say my previous update still stands, and as of today I have officially gone through my list and cleaned it up quite a bit. There are a few stories left that while they do not meet my usual "requirements" for when I read a story, I read them (and generally finished reading them) and therefore they hold a well, a special place in my heart. Perhaps in time I will too out grow them. So, the stories that remain on my favorites list are, for the most part, well written and a pleasure to read. I am always glad to offer feed back and I always try to make a point to leave a comment expressing my thoughts when I find a story that I truly enjoy. Seeing as I am such a hard reader to please I always like to let authors know that I appreciate their talent and offer them support. After all, as an artist I know its easier to work when you receive positive feedback. The section directly below, I will leave as it is for now. Its the little rant I wrote over a year and a half ago. From the About Me section onward I have gone ahead and made some updates and modifications. (this section was written in January of 2011) As of 1-31-2011 I had 65 stories added to my Favorites list. Looking through my list I realized that since making this account nearly 2 years ago I had yet to remove anything from my favorites list (my earliest fave added was 07-05-2009, so long ago). However, over the past 2 years my tastes have changed, mostly meaning, that my standards have gone up. So I have decided to go through and more or less, weed out the rotten/lesser quality stories. Why am I even bothering to do this--let alone tell you about it? I recognize that these authors have great stories, plots, grammar, and characters. Though there are some authors or stories I favor over others. Well I think that's enough rambling for one day. About Me: (Updated Feb 2015) First off, I prefer stories featuring OCxCannonCharacter pairings. But who knows perhaps one day I will actually be able to write something. I have a dog (Sandy, my 11 year old mutt) and love her to pieces. I'm also a smart ass, so try not to take things too personally. Writing/Story techniques I despise: I realize that I am not actually an author, however, I have written my fair share of essays and papers over the years to know the basics when it comes to writing. I've read a lot over the years and its what I've learned from what I've read, written, and experienced that I'm using to give these tips and pointers. (Note: numbers 2, 5, and 6 are the biggest things I can't stand) 1. Insert reader type stories. Personally its impossible for me to read a story when I keep seeing "then you blah blah blah." Even if you originally write a story in first person point of view, go back while editing and change the point of view. Not only does it make the story sound more refined, but it also helps to eliminate the possible backlash of nasty reviews. 2. One of my biggest pet peeves are Mary-Sue type characters. Understandably, making an OC is a difficult task, but to create them and have them not be a Mary-Sue is even harder. However, I have read plenty of stories that have been able to accomplish this; for example, a character can possess some Mary Sue traits (depending on what those traits are) and yet have enough flaws and shortcomings to negate them. Over time as I have read more stories I have come to realize that some stories that I liked awhile ago (mostly ones from Quizilla, before I came here, as well as some from here) are actually not all that great. In fact, looking back at them, the characters from those stories now scream Mary-Sue at me and it truly makes me wonder why I even liked that story so much in the first place. Ignorance is bliss I suppose. 3. Bad grammar is a big "No-no" for me too. Always try investing in a Beta, these guys are there to help you and can really polish things up! Even experienced writers don't publish something after a first, or even a few, drafts. They go back, they reread and revise. They take the time to read over things and correct any mistakes, and even then sometimes they miss things its simple human error. Having a story which contains minimal grammatical and spelling errors makes the story easier to read and shows your audience that you care about the quality of your work. 4. In addition to the Mary-Sue issue, one thing that really gets on my nerves is when a character has either two different colored eyes, or their eyes change color (whether it's due to their mood, power, etc.) it just annoys me...plain and simple.Giving your character unique qualities like this in order to help them stand out and make an impression on other characters is another example of an easy way to have your characters be accepted by the main cannon characters. Don't rely on "shock" value! Or, if you do feel the undying need to give your character these traits, try not to harp on them to the point it borders on annoying. You don't want your character to be defined by heterochromia, but rather their personality and what they are able to contribute to the over all story. This can also include giving a character a "dark"and dramatic back story or one that has made them hate the world and everything in it and caused them to become sour and resentful. That's not to say your character can't have a dark past, but when you shove it down the reader's throat, it can cause the reader to lose interest in what happened. You've got to think, OCs with dramatic back stories are a dime a dozen, and yet, there are many strong OCs with normal or even abnormal back stories that don't cause the reader to want to roll their eyes when a new part of their past that is revealed. In fact, there are many people in the real world who despite having terrible things occur in their pasts, are some of the most upbeat and cheerful people. Others are simply more private about such events, but generally you don't see many people acting surly and mysterious every moment of the day because of something that happened years ago. 5. I am a romantic, just look through my favorites list and you will notice this. That being said, a thing that bothers me about a romance story is when the OC and the love interest fall for each other too quickly. I personally prefer slow paced, realistic stories. Stories that take the time to develop characters and the relationships between them tend to be stronger and are generally the more memorable ones to me. 6. Out Of Characterness...yeah OOC...I just can't stand it, as my last point pretty much says. Changing a character's personality (and not informing the reader you plan to do so) is pretty much a huge insult to the character and a big Fuck You to readers out there who don't enjoy that style of writing. The characters that were not created by you and were written a certain way shouldn't be changed just to suit one's whims (unless, once again, the author purposefully and knowingly does so and makes sure to warn the reader as such). Think about it, you wouldn't appreciate it if someone were to take your character or even you and completely change their or your personality? Here are some examples of OOC that simply drive me insane and tips to avoid it: If there is a character who tends to be aloof, detached, distant, solitary, or unsociable don't simply have them change their whole persona in the course of two chapters because your OC happened to enter the picture. Also, putting their aforementioned qualities into over drive in order to try and assure the reader that they are in fact keeping them character is almost just as bad as OOC. If the main character is someone who happens to fool around and not take love seriously, then don't have them change completely and suddenly become completely infatuated with an OC. If you're concerned that you're writing the character and they are starting to come off OOC, then step back and think of a happy median. You don't want them to be a different character completely, but at the same time you don't want their personality to be on steroids either. Think about it, a person doesn't just change their entire personality in the course of a day, week, or even a month. It can take years! As we grow up, our personalities are shaped based on experiences and people we know, and we spend years developing into the people we are today. That being said, characters aren't simply going to change so easily in stories either. Yes, there is the occasional event where something life altering happens and causes the character to change. But you've got to think, it takes time. Its like a metamorphosis, one gradually makes changes, consciously or unconsciously, to shape and mold ourselves and over time we do change. That's how we grow as people, and the same goes for characters too. Nurture them and their growth, make sure they don't simply change over night into a new person.7. Having an OC basically mirror the main character's personality and traits so it'll make writing the two of them together easier is a pretty cheap trick as well. Try challenging yourself, make your character different than that of the person you are trying to pair them with. If the main character is distant and a loner, make someone who isn't necessarily over the top sunshine and rainbows but don't make them exactly like the main character either. Challenge yourself by making them unique and not identical to the main character. After all, making your OC just like the main character is basically like just making a clone of said character and sticking them in a relationship with themselves. Favorite Stories: (I do plan to go back and add my favorite stories. All of which generally consist of: Good plots, grammar, characters, etc.) Last Updated: |
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