I've loved the Star Wars saga for a while now, and "Judging Angels" is the result. We've had our setbacks, but it keeps returning to 'haunt' me, so I'll just have to finish it, won't I? :)

Thank you so much for investing your time in my writing. Feedback is eagerly anticipated and rapidly responded to. I'm looking forward to finally sharing what I've known since 2009: how the story ends.

Warmly,
RW

"Judging Angels" Author's Notes

I recently reread the story and found the notes jarring and disruptive, so I've moved them here. Please scroll down to the next bolded section to read the amazing reviews. :)

Prologue (Or, 'The Dealer')

A/N: This story was taken down without my full consent, all notes and backup copies destroyed. A few months later, I recovered what I could and began again, only to get my laptop stolen. I'm starting again. And I'll keep starting again until I finish it. Thank you for your patience and support, and I look forward to hearing from you. - RW (April 2015)

Ch.1: Face of an Angel

Pronunciation Guide: Zade ("ZAYd"); Sulmari ("sool-MAHR-ee"); Cysm ("SIZ-zum"); Toph-Rin-San ("tawf-rinn-SAHN")

Ch.5: Reminders

Jakk ("Jack"); Favjak Trystian ("FAHV-jacques TRISS-tee-inn")

Ch.8: A Friend in Need

Pronunciation Guide: Watto's "Eh?" (the "a" sound in a very angry "AND?" without consonants)

Ch.9: Consequences

Pronunciation Guide: Vinmel Grott ("VINN-mell GROAT"); Fallon ("FOUL-un"); Herlig ("HAH-LAY" – equal weight for each syllable); Aesha ("HAY-shah" with a silent 'h'); Kaima ("KY-mah"; the "ky" in "sky")

Ch.10: Away

A/N: Here it is, the last completed chapter before my lengthy break (and one of my favorites). Given how long it took me to post again, the title is pretty ironic. Enjoy! - RW

Pronunciation Guide: Haverson ("HAVE-ur-sin"); Tatoo ("TAT-too", not "tat-TOO"); Kestrel ("KESS-trill")

Drink Guide: Corellian Fog (three parts whiskey, one part lager, twist of lime); Socorran Speeder Bomb (three parts stout, one part cream and whiskey)

Ch.11: Cause For Alarm

A/N: Well, it's far from perfect, but after two years of 'block', it's finally here: the next chapter of "Judging Angels". Things should hopefully go easier from here on out. Thank you for your patience, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

03.09.16 update -- That was in May of 2015. Sorry, guys. :-/

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"Judging Angels" Reviews

I've treasured every review I've gotten for this story, and a few have even helped shape its plot. Chapter 9, in particular, would be nothing like it is if not for Angie's comment on Chapter 8 that she 'couldn't wait to see the game'. That comment motivated me to dig extra deep and do research, rather than glossing over details and skipping to the dialogue, and this additional effort resulted in something I really feel proud of. Also, the OC Favjak will make a reappearance at some point, largely because you guys let me know you liked him; he could easily have been a one-shot character. I want you to know I'm grateful for your thoughts, so I've mined my inbox for past reviews and have posted them here, to let all of you know your words weren't wasted in the madness that robbed me of my story. Please keep the feedback coming, and I look forward to making it worth your while. :)

Prologue (Or, 'The Dealer')

"I'm intrigued. There are so many ways this story could go, yet I have no idea what's coming. I'll be staying tuned!" --EmeraldEyedJedi

"Four words: You are a genius." -- aka shellybean

Ch.1: Face of an Angel

"Yes, I suppose intriguing was a good word to use, since it's part of the title... ;) I like this story - it's the first Padme-Jedi story I've read that looks promising. She's still in-character, which is incredible, seeing as a young queen is quite different from a Jedi. And now we know where Anakin is...where else but a mechanic's shop? :) But it seems like he's had some training...At least, he knows more than normal about the Jedi. Curious. Update soon! :)" --EmeraldEyedJedi

"Great plot idea. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also the way you're portraying the characters is really excellent." -- kittyhawk09

"Great story ;D This is a really good idea :)" -- Master Esso Antos

"good :)" -- Skatious

"Intriguing, and nice. I can't wait to read the next chapter(s), PLEASE UPDATE! :D" -- Altam Skies

Ch.2: Visions of the Past

"Jeez hurry with another chp it's like been an hour or so since you put this one up... Lol joking take ur time, pretty good but where is mr skywalker?" -- Caleb118.rio

"Great chapter;D" -- Master Esso Antos

"Very intriguing. I wonder what Qui gon will think when padme reveals she met anakin skywalker. Hmm" -- kittyhawk09

Ch.3: The Commander's Commission

"Great chapter;D" -- Master Esso Antos

"Great story! Very well-written. The characters are spot on and the plot moves at a good pace. But the story's not over! Please continue! It's the best Jedi Padme story I've read!" -- Wella Targana

"Extremely entertaining thus far. I'm looking forward to future installments!" -- Trayus

"I REEEEAAAALLLY like this story. The juxtaposition of the two characters' places is really interesting, and Anakin is of course hilarious. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE post more!" -- Crazy (guest)

Ch.4: Duracrete Day

"This is a great story so far, very well written, and I really like the way Anakin is so smooth with Padme. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!" -- Angie (guest)

"UPDATE SOON! )" -- (guest)

Ch.5: Reminders

"I like how you've fleshed out Anakin's past here. Great job!" -- Crazy (guest)

"Hmm, interesting AU. I'm usually not fond of jedi padme stories, makes her cold and stiff like the rest of them. But somehow you pulled off a relatively nice jedi padme. Keep it up. Eagerly awaiting the next update. Cheers, mate." -- Shattered-Destiny00

"I must say, darlin, you have captured my attention and imagination with this fic. It's the first time I've ever ready Padme-as-a-Jedi and Anakin is not, but you've done such a wonderful job fitting them into their respective roles. I'm very curious about who the man in Padme's nightmares is, and how did Anakin get the honorific title of commander? Oh yes, you have me quite curious. I anxiously await the next chapter so I can know more! And, I absolutely love Favjak- he seems like a fun character to write. I hope there may be more of him sometime? :) Your writing style is superb, darlin, and your characters are real. Keep up the good work! LadyZel" -- LadyZelthePen

Ch.6: Out of Mos Espa

"Interesting insight into shmi and Ani, I'm guessing a flashback not present story line? Keep up the good work and update soon." -- Hayden Avery (guest)

"Great chapter. I always wondered how Anakin and Cliegg would get along if he'd stayed. It's gotta be hard being Shmi. Only wanting the best for her son, but he's just so stubborn. It'd be interesting to see how this universe's Anakin reacts to the Jedi, after even more time to think of himself as practically invincible. I need to catch up on this story's events. It has been awhile." -- Imaginarian

"This sounds very interesting. I look forward to your next update." -- CommChatter

"I think I went into shock when I found this story updated on the force (dot) net. I have finally caught up on this amazing story. I have a lot of questions. What happened to Qui-gon? How did anakin and Senator Palpy meet and in turn...their so called partnership develop-does palpy know about anakin's gifts... I really look forward to the next installment" -- Venus Star2-com

Ch.7: A Friend in Need

"Oh dear. Never a good sign when Palpatine decides to rear his ugly head. And here I was hoping it would be a Jedi :( ah well. I also have a feeling Anakin is going to make some pretty bad choices coming up here. Lots of bad things surrounding this chapter. Eek. Looking forward to the things to come. As long as they include Palpy's demise." -- Serena Bancroft

"Interesting to see Palpatine coming in again. He is always so good at playing the benevolent old man, you really hit the nail on the head with your characterization of him." -- Hayden Avery

"Hmm. Sounds good, I look forward to seeing where this goes." -- CommChatter

"Since Palpatine is involved, you can tell Anakin is going to do something stupid. Can't wait to find out why it is! Update soon :D" -- AAA (guest)

"This chapter was awesome, it's always perfectly in character and you made it seem like this is what would happen if Anakin didnt become a Jedi and stayed on Tatooine, which is awesome and in this chapter I like the whole watto Anakin dynamic, so GOODBYE *leaves room dramatically, cause you gotta keep it fresh*" -- Rosabelmay

"So thats how he met Palpatine,boy it is going to be hard for him to not trust him now. Palpatine already has Anakin in his pocket but he does not know it yet." -- Jedi Angel001

"I just got caught up on this story, and you really have an interesting plot going on! I like the flash back to Anakin's past on Tatooine, the way he gambles and won the house, and the meeting of the Chancellor is very imaginative. Now he is going to win money to buy the hyperdrive engine, I can't wait to see the game!" -- Angie (guest)

"This story is fantastic, I love your Anakin! Can't wait to read more, and see how the relationship between Ani and Padme deepens!" -- TheReader (guest)

"This story has a lot less Anakin/Padme for a romance story, but I think it will come. I like the story, so keep it up" -- JourneyRocks13

Ch.8: Consequences

"Oh, this is so sad, what a tear jerker! I hope that Devaronian meets a painful end somehow, even if it is not from Anakin. You really paint a picture with your writing, I really am enjoying this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!" -- Angie (guest)

"Damn, I never would have expected that. I wonder what will happen next" -- JourneyRocks13

"Poor Anakin. What was Shmi about to say? Great chapter! Update soon!" -- AAA (guest)

"So sad to see Shmi die and the guilt Anakin has since it was because of him." -- Jedi Angel001

"But, but no I don't want her I die, why did she die, it's just plain rude! Well, apart from her dying (I d" [A/N: The rest of the comment got cut off. :-/ RW] -- Rosabelmay

"Poor Anakin. I always tear up when Shmi dies." -- CommChatter

"That was incredibly sad. At least she wasn't tortured this time. Hopefully Anakin follows her advice. Command. Suggestion. Whatever. Great chapter!" -- Imaginarian

Ch.9: Away

"Poor Anakin. Is he still going to fall for Palpy's tricks?" -- Crazy (guest)

"That's kinda depressing. It makes sense though. I like it a lot." -- CommChatter

"Pretty sure I was in a permanant state of smilleyness throughout this entire chapter, I was just reading with a crazy clown smile, it freaked my brother out when he came in my room and there is a good chance he is slightly worried about me, wow slightly off topic, anyway I was smiling because of the extreme awesomeness of the chapter, I kind of wanted to just hug Anakin, he seems so sad, I don't want him to be sad, he's way too pretty, and then when the chancellor came I was kind of shouting at my iPod for him to go away and not corrupt ani and make him an evil sith, it may not have happened but you can see its what palpatine Is planning to do caus he is an evil *. *clears throat* you ready for this exit, it's a good and very unusually awesome one *stands up an walks out the door* didn't see that coming did you? It was so unusual of course you didn't" -- Rosabelmay

"Well done, I like the chapter. It is very good, and one that leaves much to think about in the future" -- JourneyRocks13

"UGH Palpatine Great chapter" -- Imaginarian

"Well written, interesting in how he left Tatooine. Enjoyed the other perspectives, the bar tender and the ones betting on the game." -- Hayden Avery

That's the last of the legacy reviews. Thank you for the support and inspiration. :)