Author has written 1 story for Undertale. Well, I'm just some random dipstick who'll be critiquing, and writing some fics. Don't expect anything good, you will be disappointed. I'm kinda undertale trash, so expect a fic or two about it. Oh, and by the way, if my writing is bad just say so. Don't dance around the issue; don't try to put it nicely, tell me what I'm fucking up, please. I'd like to actually write decently. everyone deserves a second chance, but not a third. i've been burned in enough dumpster fires to know what gasoline and garbage smell like. going to spend tomorrow (today? its 3 am) working on an update for the only fic i currently have published. going to add it after an hour of picking it apart. |
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