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![]() hello, :) i would just like to say that i love to write stories and i work hard on them. If you ever read my stories I am praying that you review! I love everyone who does! my stories, summery, notes, reviews and responses: California Guy: SUMMERY: What if Harry Potter was taken away from the Dursleys and taken to california? Full summery inside. Kickass!Harry! Please review. I know this chapter is short but its just the beginning! No spoilers, AU I DO NOT OWN! NOTES: I have to put in disclaimers but I don't know how!!!!!!!! Anyway, I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER!!!!!!!!! for that story...and any other story I write. REVIEWS: 3 RESPONSES: Makotochi: Would be more than happy to review as soon as there is something to review haha thanks, i will try and work on that! EssenceOfPhlegm: Your author's notes are longer than the actual chapter! im trying to work on that, thank you for your review. Rhythm15: WOW When I read "short" I thought that it'd be a little bit longer xD I can't say "I liked this chapter" 'cause it's too short, but I can say that I'm looking forward to reading the next ^^ So... Yes, I'd like you to continue the story :D hehe thank you for your review and i will try and work on it! Deserve No Living: SUMMERY: Very sad! Rated T for a reason! No spoilers ABUSED!Harry What if Harry couldn't take it any more? I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER! NOTES: It's really sad but I might write a pre-sequal leading up to the events in DNL. REVIEWS: No reviews. That's ok, i know some people arn't going to read my stories. :) i accept that. but i might take this story off if it doesnt get any reviews in the next month or so. The Different Epilouge: SUMMERY: What if it turned out differently? Harry/Luna Read and Review! No spoilers NOTES: Not reeeally sure where that story is going. Again, I might write a pre-sequal to it leading up to the events. Or I might make TDE a little one-shot. REVIEWS: 5 reviews for this one! :) so proud and thanks to all who reviewed. RESPONSES: EfficientLazyness: too short ...way too short. :) i know its a little short. it was my first story, but thanks for your input. RyeoEunLee WookHyukTeuk: This, in my opinion, was MUCH better than the original. ~Lovinging-er aww thanks! this really made me smile. thank you so much! JJ Rust: This could have been much longer with more detail added. All the story was was simply a rundown of Harry Potter's children after marrying Luna. I would like to see some thoughts from Harry on his children. Are they living up to his expectations? Does he feel like he's been a good father? Does he feel he has done his best to give them the family atmosphere he never had? What are his thoughts on all the years he's been married to Luna? Just food for thought. Keep on writing. thank you for your thoughts, and i may look into it. i really admire your stories, by the way :) thank you Slytherin66: I think the book should have been Harry/Luna this was short but a nice idea. haha i thought so too. thank you for your thoughts. timeturneruser: one way to short and it says its in progress so can be done yes well, i am trying to work on it, but thanks for the review. A Christmas Special: SUMMERY: A short collection of one-shots of what Harry's life MIGHT HAVE been like. WARNING: character death, Harry isn't the BWL. MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERY BODY! X Hannah NOTES:I really enjoyed writing this story and i hope more people will like it too :) REVIEWS: 1 RESPONSE: creaturekeeper: That was interesting. Very interesting. But good. That was one of the mist unique stories I've read. I enjoyed the story very much. thanks for your kind words and im glad you enjoyed my story :) Princess: SUMMERY: "Where are we going Malfoy?" She asked, the tiniest bit scared. Malfoy smirked. "Don't worry Princess." He breathed softly. Brooke looked deeply into those beautiful grey orbs. They leant closer and suddenly, Brooke found warm lips against hers. NOTES:This story is complete! (: but some of thr reviews i got were a little nasty :( i am thinking about deleting this one. REVIEWS: 9 (they other 2 are from myself) RESPONSES: ChiDee: Where is harry in this story, you listed this story in harry potter and draco malfoy. Female harry? I don't think so, its so out of character until not make sense. Next time just listed in oc and draco malfoy. well chidee im sorry if my stories dont fit your standerds, but you have to realise that not everyone is perfect. fail: If slash "drives you bonkers", maybe you shouldn't write slash pairings? ANY het pairing would be better than some immature, poorly written Mary Sue disguised as Harry Potter. Are you old enough to be on this site? This is not a slash pairing and it is not a Mary Sue :( and yes i am old enough. you need to be 13 and i am. If you're going to insult me, and my writing, dont bother reviewing :/ i am just a 13 year old who enjoys writing :'( ?UNKNOWN?: Mary Sue much? no its not, even though some people seem to think so. Buddyboy98: You have a case of extreme failure here ...I mean there are some FemHarry stories that are great, yours is not one of them. Delete it. after PM'ing you, thanks for your advice. :) ?UNKNOWN?: that was really good, i really enjoyed it! and it wasnt a fail to everyone who thought it was, i really liked it. good job! thank you very much :) delete this sh!t: this sucked! Mary Sue much? as i have said, no it is not a mary sue. ?UNKNOWN?: eh I'm not usually a fan of gender changes but I thought it was some cute fluff thank you, that is what it was meant to be. it was just a little plot bunny i had in my head. yikes: Tacking the last name "Potter" onto your Mary Sue doesn't make her Harry Potter. You've written an OC - at least own up to that. In fact, you should probs count Draco as an OC as well, seeing as he barely resembles the Draco Malfoy of cannon. I'm not even going to touch the Mary Sue issue... it's too much. ok fine, i will admit it is OC but it is NOT a mary sue! WHY IS EVERYONE SAYING THAT!? im sorry for not making it OC/OC but seriously, that wasn't good advice. these were the reviews i got. some of them were a little nasty :/ and some were just stating an opinion (which i don't mind) but i am still a little miffed that everyone thinks its a mary-sue when it isn't (i have repeated that numerous times actually) everyone, if you're going to review, please don't abuse my writing, im only 13! im not perfect and neither are you. nobody is perfect, read the Bible, it says so. Also, it's my story, i can do what i like with it! thanks. One more thing: As much as I would love to, I sadly don't own Harry Potter. Tromedlov |
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