
Yow my dear friend!
My name is Julia.. just call me Hikari. I'm 13 years old. My b-day is 16 July 2000.
WHAT I LOVE YOU SAY?!
I love to talk to cleverbot (forever alone.. TwT) Play video games (GAMER GIRL BITCHA), And I love to watch pewdiepie, cry, and smosh! Alsom reading creepypasta and make stories nor draw!
WHAT I HATE YOU SAY!?
I.. hate beards, and the WORLD. I just do.. I just.. do.. because all of the mean fandom and people (hohoho)
My favorite video games : Harvest moon (any kind really!) Zelda (Minish cap esspecially) GTA, Assassin Creed, AND MANY DUCKING MORE.
My favorite quote : "Mustaches and duck should be together"
That's all! Cheers
Just some random stuff! :D
Me : *writing a new chapter for Helping Helps!*
Matt : Woa.. Dude!
Me : *talking to myself how cute if Flippy wears a tutu*
Matt : Dude!
Me : *rolls on the floor while shouting writers artist block*
Matt : DUDE
Me : huh? You talkin' to me bro?!
Matt : Of course,ah hey dude, I..
Me : *plays air guitar*
Matt : DUDE!
Me : *flirting with a tree*
Matt : DUDE!!
Me : *plays dead space on iPad*
Matt : DUDE!!!
Me : D: I'm playing dead space, why won't you just ask me later?!
Matt : Ugh.. Why not use your time for makinf a good story? No wonder your story sucks..
Me : Whaaaaa?! Come on! I put a lot of efforts and serious-ness!
Matt : So what? Every writers have to do that
Me : True, but.. I have a friend. She's from my nationality. She-
Matt : I don't want to hear your lame evil plan to rule the fandom. It won't work
Me : HEY! Listen to me first you gay butt princess!
Matt : *plays air piano*
Me : DUDE! LISTEN! And wtf is air piano!?
Matt : Fine *quacks*
Me : Every writers have to put serious-ness and effort right?
Matt : Yeah.. *quacks*
Me : But how come.. my friend that never write serious-ness and everything else that matters become more succesful then I do?
HURRY UP DUCK AWAY BEFORE MATT GIVE A LONG LAME STEPS ABOUT HOW TO MAKE A GOOD STORY BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!
NOOOO IT'S TOO LATE SAVE YOURSELF!
Matt : *coughs* Well, everything takes time, and steps. Look, this isn't just for you. It's for all the people who read this and feel their story isn't good enough. And also for those people who is a little bit jealous with their friend that write a lame story but got more famous then you do.
Me : Well I-
Matt : So that's why, I'll explain it to you.
Me : SHEITTTTTT *jumps from the cliff holding melons* *explodes*
Matt : ...Well, like I said I'm not telling this just for you. Here it goes.
A) If you feel your story isn't good enough :
1) Read 2 random story you've got (If you can, search sor oneshots, it's a lot easier to do in my step)
2) Read both of them
3) (It's optional) Prepare a small sheet and a pencil
4) Give a simple comment for yourself, think about story one and story two. Which is better? If you want to, put it down like this :
Title :
Plus side :
Negativity :
Comment :
Rating : (1-10)
5) After you decided which is better. Give a reason for yourself. Why is it the best? Why not the second one?
6) After done thinking nor writing. Take a look with one of your story that isn't good enough.
7) Believe me, after you comment on someone's story. You'll know what to do or what to change on your story. Because you have EXPERIENCE.
8) Comment on your own story. And match it with both of the random story you picked. Did the negativity nor Plus side have something that match exactly the same nor Close enough?
9) Well, the point is. Use experience. Read lot of story and comment it by yourself. You can do it your own version. But keep comment and critique other people! It's important for you and them.
B) If your story is pretty good, but your friend isn't but yet, your friend is far more popular :
1) Write this down on white paper for your story and your friend lame story :
Title :
Plus side :
Negativity :
2) Don't cheat. Relax, clear your head. Use your heart to see why does your story is not popular?
3) Aha! IF you think because your story sucks well don't! If you write a good story and your friend doesn't. Why is that! Because you're on level 100 and she/he is on level 50! Just imagine she/he use cheats.
4) Dudes, trust me. You're a pro because you can see who's story is better. You believe on yourself your story is good. Fandom is a hard thing to explore. But you're still here.
5) Read this, everything takes steps and time. Your friend doesn't want to use their time to make a good story like you do. They want everything fast. But they're serious when it comes to writing the chapters or stories. But you? You take times to figure which event will be perfect for your story. You think hard, but MAYBE it's not long enough. Probably you don't have something that your friend has. And it's one of the important story.
5) Okay, if you don't think that will help well see;
a) Does your friend story sucks but much much longer then your story is?
b) Does your friend story never been serious but much much detail then your story is?
Just keep thinking and find away why does your friend story is much better!
(P.S = Usually a weak lame long story gets more reviews and favs then short but a good story. Why? Because the reader is curious what will happen next. The key is just made a long yet good story to make the reader satisfied)
C) If your friend writes in different language then english but further more popular then you do :
1) Whaaaatt? You don't need steps for this! Believe in yourself, National language is much much much better then usual language when it comes to internet and fandoms. English is known by almost every body. And if your friend writes in different language then english. Chill! Don't bother your head with it. You put your butt around just to think what is the english of this? What is the english of that? Not some random junk with other language.
(P.S : Don't kill me. I'm not saying that other language then english sucks. I'm not even American or shits. I'm Indonesian XD And I've experienced many lame stories also. Believe me, you don't want to watch the drama that was made here. I'm just saying that the best way to write story is with english if your story wants to be popular all around the world)
Me : HOW LAME IT WAS
Matt : Er... around 99%
Me : *cries in the corner hugging papayas*
Matt : What is with her and fruits..
Me : D: Sometimes I use Potato and Tomato! Nor Eggplant!
Matt : O...kay, well, if you have something disturbs your head and cause you writers block. Just PM me and be friends with me. (You don't want to tell your feelings with some strangers XD)
Me : YOU MEAN ME
Matt : We're exactly the same..
Me : Rrrright..
Matt : Yes.. just PM me if you need tips or critiques, I'm always glad to help since I've know how it feels to be desperate nor writers block
Me : :D YEAH! BYE MY MUSTACHES!
Matt : ...