Raya Di
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I'm new to writing and the only TV show I'm planning to write fanfictions for right now is NCIS. Usually I prefer to read.

I just started watching NCIS two and a half years ago and somehow became addicted. I started from season one and my favorite character is Tony (or maybe I should say ‘was’ because I loved the Tony from the first seasons and not the incompetent clown from later seasons).

I loved the first seasons. It had really good characters, humor and I liked the dynamics between the characters as well Unfortunately later on the show lost everything I liked.

The cases became boring, the characters flat/one dimensional, the dynamics drastically changed without any obvious reason and the background stories are now all the same (I just say… ‘daddy issues’ so Gibbs can play Papa for everyone) which I think is boring as well.

What I dislike most is Tony’s ‘development’. In the first seasons he was a character with many layers. He sometimes played the fool but you always knew that he’s actually smart and competent. He cared for others and took his job seriously. He came back to work at night and when people thought he was lazy he actually had the job already done, he had good ideas which helped solve the cases. He could lead an investigation on his own and even Gibbs made clear he trusted him with that.

Then in later seasons (I would say it started with season 4 or 5) he gradually lost his competence and was treated like an idiot. He became a clown that didn’t do his job, was silly all the time and couldn’t do a thing right. Hell, he wasn’t even able to bring a key from the car to the office without losing it in the elevator… His only ideas were ‘check the ex’ and he had maybe a good moment or two per season. While he was good with people in the first seasons no one cared or liked him later on (witnesses, visitors, team members).

When anything went wrong it was usually Tony who was made responsible - even if it wasn't his fault or not his alone.

And I could go on like this. Honestly, what happened? It makes absolutely no sense to me. It is as if someone tried to continue a story from someone else without understanding what the character was about and totally ruined him.

The dynamics between the Characters… Everyone in the team has someone very close to them, except Tony: Jimmy – Breena, Jimmy – Ducky , Ducky – Gibbs; Gibbs – Abby, Abby – McGee and lately also McGee – Gibbs and McGee – Delilah (and before season 11 Gibbs-Ziva, Abby-Ziva). And what about Tony? He seems to have no one at all. I think the closest right now would be Ducky. In the first seasons Abby and Tony were really good friends – now they barely talk to each other; Gibbs didn’t always treat him the best but he trusted him and had his back, now there is nothing: no trust, no care, no respect. One ‘good job’, ‘I trust you’ or ‘I depend on you’ per season doesn’t do it for me.

Yes, I know I wrote a lot about Tony here but he was just my favorite and somehow he's the one that was changed the most (in a bad way).

I love to read stories where Tony is strong, competent and smart. He doesn't need to be a superhero but I love to see the old Tony :-) I also think he deserves some more personal life and maybe a nice girlfriend (one that can see the real Tony and likes him the way he is). In the last seasons it looked like Tony sits alone at home not doing anything (except watching movies) most of the time when he doesn't work. That's really sad because he seemed to be a person that likes to spent his time with other people.

I liked Abby and Gibbs as well but they're not what they used to be... Sometimes I just want to hit them and sometimes I want the old version back. I can't really decide ;-)
I still like Ducky and Jimmy :-)

I'ver never been a Tiva fan so I definitley won't write anything with Tiva in it. I never even saw friendship between them. Especially after the whole Rivkin story. It was also as if Tony was only there for Tiva storylines. Now that she isn't on the show anymore it looks like the writers don't know what to do with Tony anymore.

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I Shouldn't Have To by SASundance reviews
Out of adversity can come great change and personal growth. Sometimes it's easier to settle for second best, sometimes we don't even realise we're doing it, to we feel we don't deserve better. When disaster strikes, it gives us a wake-up call we need to reassess our life, to see what we have is lacking. The courage to say, 'I'm not going to take it any more.' Tony-centric
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 31 - Words: 172,223 - Reviews: 937 - Favs: 399 - Follows: 325 - Updated: 8/22/2015 - Published: 10/3/2014 - Complete
Irreversible Step by Callisto-HK reviews
You can't just say things and then take them back or act like you haven't said anything! It just doesn't work that way. Words can cut deeper than knives and can leave permanent scars on one's soul. And maybe that's it; maybe Tony has finally had enough. /Set in season 10. Rated T for Language!/ Case-fic!
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 10 - Words: 21,403 - Reviews: 532 - Favs: 609 - Follows: 404 - Updated: 4/11/2014 - Published: 9/9/2013 - Tony D., Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
Will The Real Narcissist Please Stand Up? by SASundance reviews
This is a 'what if" story. What if Gibbs and Ducky weren't alone when they made those remarks about Tony being a narcissist in Murder 2.0 in season 6? What if the person listening in, then told someone else. What would be the consequences for Tony and the team? This story is complete.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 20 - Words: 78,714 - Reviews: 543 - Favs: 470 - Follows: 331 - Updated: 8/9/2013 - Published: 1/14/2013 - Tony D. - Complete
Was It Payback? by Nash Carter reviews
A "Lost at Sea" tag. A one shot, mostly dialog; just a few things I wanted one of my favorite characters to say. This is NOT TIVA, and if you are a huge Ziva fan, you might want to skip this story.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,822 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 17 - Published: 11/7/2012 - Tony D., Ziva D. - Complete
An Embarrassing Injury by Arress reviews
When Tony receives an embarrassing injury while McGee and Ziva should be listening, how funny is it really? Alternate ending to "Dead Air". G,D Father/son. Ziva, McGee bashing, don't like, don't read. Story complete, will post 1 chapter a day.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 9 - Words: 17,752 - Reviews: 304 - Favs: 715 - Follows: 242 - Updated: 1/14/2011 - Published: 1/6/2011 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Tony D. - Complete
Moby Dick by Cold Ember reviews
Set during Faking It. What if Tony had been hit harder?
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,104 - Reviews: 103 - Favs: 327 - Follows: 76 - Updated: 10/18/2006 - Published: 10/14/2006 - Tony D., Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
Boxed In by Florence1 reviews
Tag for the episode boxed in. Tony is left feeling excluded, nothing new there. One shot. Complete.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,108 - Reviews: 85 - Favs: 368 - Follows: 49 - Published: 2/26/2006 - Tony D. - Complete
Chain of command reviews
After the events from 11x07 Better Angels Tony demands answers from Gibbs. Why wasn't he allowed to take point in Gibbs' absence? For everyone who hates how Tony is always made the idiot of the show and how the fact he's SFA is always ignored.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,346 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 112 - Follows: 49 - Published: 5/15/2014 - Tony D., Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete