Hey guys, call me Frills.

I'm not much of a writer, but I've always enjoyed it so I might as well start somewhere.

Harsh, thorough (but RESPECTFUL) criticism GREATLY encouraged! (I've always had a strange desire for harsh feedback)

If you're still too shy to send "harsh" feedback, just use this list as a guideline and add your own details to provide me with some insight!

Critique:

-Any spelling and/or grammatical errors?

-Did you enjoy the story? (Is it boring?? -What could I do to spice it up?)

-Does everything work? (Are the characters consistent, does the story make sense?)

-Are the characters likable, too cliché, etc.?

-Anything you'd like to see more or less of?

-Does the story move at a comfortable pace?

-Do you feel that the setting is appropriate?

-Any other details or opinions you would like to add?