Warning Spoilers for Maximum Ride Forever Were any of you disappointed with the lack of detail in the Intimate scene between Max and Fang on page 75-76. Well I took it upon my self to write out a more descriptive version of that scene a very descriptive scene.

Hey guys this is my first story i am publishing on here so i hope you enjoy. This story takes place after the Excalibur episodes and is a Sinon x Kirito fanfic. this is M because i will be dealing with subjects such as breakups, very strong language and suggestive themes. I have some space left here so ill just say Sword Art Online is awesome :

I eyed Fang curiously and saw a lingering flush across his cheeks. I scanned the table, not wanting to cause a scene, and leaned in to whisper, "What's the problem?" He fixed me with that dark stare of his for the fiftieth time that night and whispered back, "I'm ready for dessert." Rated M for sexual content. Two-shot, Complete

After sixteen years, Max and Fang finally admit to themselves and to each other that they are in love with one another. Now, their relationship is heating up hotter than ever. What happens when they finally let their emotional walls come tumbling down?