Breezefire
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Joined 05-16-04, id: 590909
Author has written 4 stories for Valdemar universe.
Hi! I am a 13 year old writer, who writes all Mercedes Lackey fanfics ^_^ Please read and review! Thanks to all reviewers!

I'm back from my trip to Europe! It was a lot of fun.

Just added: The River, a really random one-shot, and my first song fic! Tragic and angsty, as usual...why can't I write any happy one shots?

And...the ninth chapter of Poison and Prison, Comments, has finally arrived! Sorry for the delay, my brother was hogging the computer and writer's block was plaguing me.

Here are my muses:

I have three.

Kertala: my head muse, a gryphon. She's the only one who has the patience to write stories with more than one chapter, but she spends her time snapping at the other muses for not writing anything. She also has a very fiery temper.

"I do not sssnap. I teach, Brrreezefirrre."

Selera: an angsty firecat who only writes tragic one-shots, and with absolutely no patience for more than one chapter. She makes her characters absolutely miserable. Whenever the other muses need help portraying a character's sadness or miserable state of mind, Selera writes it.

:Firecats are dignified, Breezefire, and you are insulting all of us.:

Selera punctuates this sentence by seeing a doll of one of her characters, Parnit, smiling happily. Selera jumps on the doll, and shreds the doll into tiny pieces with her claws.

Now the gryphon and the firecat hear a horrible, butchered rendition of "Toxic" from above.

"Not again," Kertala murmured angrily. "Rrruuvel!"

The hawk circling around trees above them drifted down, landing on a branch directly above Kertala's head.

Ruuvel: a bondbird, is my third muse. He is obsessed with music, and constantly has at least one song stuck in his head, which he hums...badly...with his beak. He did the song part of The River, while Selera happily made the characters miserable for the rest of the story.

Those are my muses! Dysfunctional sometimes, but they can write...

Now, here's the information on all the stories I've written:

Works in Progress

-Poison and Prison- A young woman is suspected of a murder she did not commit, and is found guilty. The mysteries of the case and the intrigues of the Palace Court surround her, as Jaseen attempts to find the bottom of the quagmire of emotions and mysterious evidence, and discover who truly committed the murder. Along the way, she discovers many secrets which people would kill to hide. Chapter 9 added, Jaseen finds out about a mysterious comment Larle made once, which she can't understand. Can you? And, she believes she may have discovered the answer to who her elusive poisoner could be...
Updated Chapter 9: Comments 8/3/04

Complete Stories/One Shots

-The Death Bell- A Companion takes the last breath and the last look at the world as his Herald dies, and the Death Bell begins to toll. The world around him is grisly, and his pain seems unending, until his life finally falters and ends. A fic written in poetry format. An angsty and tragic one shot. *Complete*
Written and updated 5/26/04

-Scar of a Lifebond- A couple has loved unconditionally for 10 years, but now one of them finds their lifebonded, and quickly breaks the lifebond. All three of their lives turn for the worse, one life fatally ending, and this is a description of the breakage and how their lives are after the decision. Tragic and angsty, a one shot which happened to end up taking three chapters to complete. *Complete*
Updated Chapter 3: Endings 6/25/04

-The River- A man has hopes for his future, and dreams of becoming an Artificer, but his dreams are dashed when his life arrives at a tragic turn, and the former child, with no responsibilities, is forced to take a job and work to support his new family, hopes running away. Tragic and angsty, one shot, my first song-fic. *Complete*
Written and updated 7/19/04

Read any that appeal to you, and please review! ^_^

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Like the Moon by Fireblade K'Chona reviews
Another update? Oh, the astonishment! Chapter 57 up, involving glorified Capture the Flag, turned ankles, overreactions, and books!
Valdemar universe - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 57 - Words: 159,378 - Reviews: 637 - Favs: 116 - Follows: 85 - Updated: 7/16/2007 - Published: 5/21/2003
Greens by Herald Kelsin reviews
This is the story of how the HOlderkin Healer from Brightly Burning who told Pol that he knew of torture made it to Haven and earned his place in the Collegium, possibly stumbling into love on the way. FINALLY UPDATED!
Valdemar universe - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 36 - Words: 99,333 - Reviews: 259 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 5/2/2006 - Published: 5/29/2004
After the Storm by JoeyStar reviews
DISCONTINUED Set a couple of years after OwlKnight, this is a continuation of the story of Elspeth and Darkwind, Firesong and Silverfox etc... including all of your favourite characters. Contains implied sex and slash.
Valdemar universe - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 83,388 - Reviews: 199 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/15/2004 - Published: 3/10/2003
Brightly Burning: Just So Long As We're Together by Herald Kelsin reviews
Lavan and Kalira reach the Havens, and turn back. Valdemar needs Heralds, and their duty must come before all else, even their love. Will they find each other again? !COMPLETE!
Valdemar universe - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 28,000 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/26/2004 - Published: 4/24/2004 - Complete
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Poison and Prison: The Life of a Kestra'chern reviews
A fatal poisoning occurs, and an innocent woman, Jaseen, is suspected and imprisoned. Jaseen becomes involved with the intrigues and mysteries of the Palace Court, and treason is nearby, as she attempts to solve her case in prison.
Valdemar universe - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 9 - Words: 18,644 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 8/3/2004 - Published: 5/19/2004
The River reviews
Song-fic, tragic one shot. How a man's life takes an abrupt turn, demolishing his hopes and dreams forever. Based on the song "The River."
Valdemar universe - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,158 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/19/2004 - Complete
Scar of a Lifebond reviews
Parnit has had one lover for 10 years, but they are not lifebonded. Suddenly, he meets his lifebonded, and he must make a decision of which relationship he must break. Chapter 3 up. Complete!
Valdemar universe - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,102 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 6/25/2004 - Published: 6/16/2004 - Complete
The Death Bell reviews
One-shot. Tragic, descriptive fic, written in poem format, of a Herald and his Companion's death, from the Companion's point of view, as the Death Bell begins to toll. Complete!
Valdemar universe - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/26/2004 - Complete