Stephen McGarrett 5-0
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Joined 07-25-15, id: 6972495, Profile Updated: 03-06-18
Author has written 2 stories for Hobbit, and Hawaii Five-O.

Hi!

I'm just a person who loves God and loves to write. I praise Him for giving me my talents. Any work I do is for Him, and because of Him. Jesus is my savior, and He saved me from myself and from sin. I love Him with all my heart.

I do not write slash. Homosexuality and lesbianism are wrong. These sins are against the Bible like any other sin, and they are against all goodness. But I do not hate lesbians or gay people. I love them and wish they would come to Christ and see His true love and sacrifice for them on the cross. I don't agree with what they're doing, but I will not hate them or curse them. I only hope they will come to realize that what they are doing is wrong. I know many of them believe that they are just "born with" this disposition. That is an absolute lie. All of us choose to make our own decisions and they have chosen to go against the Bible. Many people have called me a hater because I speak the truth, and they think that God loves homosexuals as well as loving their sins. NO. God loves the homosexual as a person, but he does not love or accept their sin. God loves you, and His arms are open wide with forgiveness if you will only repent. Our culture may accept this practice as right, but just because people say its right, doesn't mean that it is right.

I believe abortion is murder. No matter how small, life is life. A baby is God's gift of life to a mother, not a mistake. I know every woman has her rights, but what about that little baby girl who is about to get killed in the womb? Doesn't she have rights too? Even if the mother makes mistakes, that gives her NO reason to punish the baby.

I also support and love the military. I cannot describe my gratitude for what they've done to protect my life and freedoms. I love them so much, and appreciate their sacrifice for me. It is one of the greatest forms of love. They went into battle and were scarred for the rest of their lives for me. They were blown to a thousand bloody pieces for me. They carry macabre nightmares throughout their whole lives, because of what they did for me and a thousand other Americans. I will forever love and respect them.

I honor and respect the police. They are the lovers of justice, the servants of selflessness, and the masters of bravery. Their job is similar to that of the military's. They too have made sacrifices for our safety and protection. I thank all those police-men out there, wherever they are, with all my soul. Thank you for keeping my country and me safe. Mahalo Nui Loa.

I am a supporter of Israel and its people. They are God's Chosen People and I stand with them in their ongoing fight to keep THEIR homeland.

I am a strong and real Christian. I am not afraid to stand up for what is true and right. I believe in freedom and free speech, and anything that is pure, noble, and lovely. I believe I am a sinner and Jesus Christ died on the cross to wipe away my sins. I pray I would be courageous enough to die for His name if it ever came to that. There are other persecuted Christians out there who are unbelievably brave. They give up everything for Jesus, even their lives. I cannot tell you how much I admire them. Pray for the persecuted!!!

I am a Bible-believing, Christian Conservative, and I love to write.

Also, I am a big fan of LOTR and the Hobbit. They are my favorite fanfiction subjects and my favorite books and movies. ;) ALSO, I absolutely love the Hawaii 5-O series! Now hold your horses if you think I like the new one... That is a definite misconception. In the newer one, they totally ruined everyone's real characters. But the older ones with Jack Lord, James MacArthur, Kam Fong, and Zulu, are great. No cursing, not much violence, nothing inappropriate, just pure out wonderful. The banner of morality is held high. (See, you don't need all that gore, and cursing, and inappropriate stuff to make a really interesting detective show. Just lots of brilliant brains, intriguing plots, profound emotion, and wonderful acting!)

I have only posted two stories so far, but I hope to post others soon! Right now I am just editing a lot and working hard. I did post a third story titled, "I Didn't Want To", but it was rather rushed and didn't really offer the reader any answers to the questions the story posed. So, I deleted it. However, I am now working on making that fiction significantly more detailed and complex than it was.

I hope that when I do post my other works, they can live up to the standards of some of the other amazing writers on here.

Aloha and God Bless,

Stephen McGarrett 5-0

John 15:13-Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.

Notes About Reviews:

I don't ask for reviews, but even then, whether they be good or bad, you're bound to get them anyway. If any of you do want to leave a review for one of my fictions, I ask that it be mainly centered on the story(constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!). I have received reviews on my stories, which have had nothing to do with the actual story itself or how to make it better. To put it plainly, they are rude and irrelevant comments about my profile, my beliefs as a Christian, and my beliefs about homosexuality and lesbianism. Frequently these reviews are guests, who do not even have the courage to post their real name. I ask you please to stop attacking me for speaking the truth. I'm only repeating what God says in His word; if you have a problem with that, please go to God about it and ask Him. He made the laws, not me.

(Hebrews 10: 26-"For this cause God gave them up unto vile affections: for even their women did change the natural use into that which is against nature27And likewise also the men, leaving the natural use of the woman, burned in their lust one toward another; men with men working that which is unseemly, and receiving in themselves that recompense of their error which was meet.")

Also, your reviews are totally irrelevant and inappropriate to the story, and they are disrespectful to me as another writer and another human being. If you truly believe in tolerance, than tolerate me and my relationship with God. It's really quite unfair; you want all the tolerance for you and yet you deny tolerance for others. I'm simply stating my beliefs; if you don't agree with them, don't read my stories or profile. I'm not forcing you to believe the same things I do, I'm just stating the truth and I cannot emphasize that enough. If you want to hurt me or verbally abuse me, then so be it. I'll take you seriously if you actually make an account and PM me with an argument. I am ready and willing to debate. Just do not post irrelevant reviews on my stories. That is all I ask. Personally, I don't care if my bio offends anyone. All I care about is being pleasing in the eyes of God, not in those of man. (Matthew 10:33- "But whoever denies me before men, I also will deny before my Father who is in heaven.")

Pau.


The Pledge to the Greatest Stories of All Time

I’ll remember Frodo Baggins when a tear forms in my eye,

I’ll remember the Millennium Falcon when I fly through the sky,

I’ll remember Sam Gamgee when I hold a tater in my hand,

I’ll remember Thorin Oakenshield when I fight for my land,

I’ll remember Steve McGarrett when justice burns in my heart,

I’ll remember Anakin Skywalker when my soul’s torn apart,

I’ll remember Jean Valjean when I turn a new leaf,

I’ll remember Tauriel when I wallow in grief,

I’ll remember Gandalf when I see an old friend,

I’ll remember Qui-Gon when I fight to the end,

I’ll remember Inspector Javert when I look down at the sea,

I’ll remember Legolas Greenleaf when I sit up in a tree,

I’ll remember Danny Williams when I keep calm and obey,

I’ll remember Sméagol when I have turned and gone astray,

I’ll remember Obi-Wan when I’ve been betrayed,

I’ll remember Fili Oakenshield when I make a braid,

I’ll remember Fantine when all my memories are broken,

I’ll remember Chin Ho Kelly when I’m filled with devotion,

I’ll remember Lady Galadriel when I see a nightlight in my room,

I’ll remember Bilbo Baggins when I’m lost in the gloom,

I’ll remember Han Solo when I’m brash and brave,

I’ll remember R2-D2 when I misbehave,

I’ll remember Duke Lukela when I see an officer of the law,

I’ll remember Meriadoc Brandybuck when I’m feeling small,

I’ll remember Enjolras when I speak out for what is right,

I’ll remember Luke Skywalker when I hug my father tight,

I’ll remember King Thranduil when I feel all cold inside,

I’ll remember Boromir of Gondor when I struggle with my pride,

I’ll remember Bard the Lakeman when I strike the center of my mark,

I’ll remember little golden-haired Cossette when I sing like a lark,

I’ll remember Ben Kokua when I do my job and do not complain,

I’ll remember Pippin Took when I do something completely insane,

I’ll remember C3-PO when I do my best to be polite,

I’ll remember Master Yoda when I give my wisest insight,

I’ll remember Marius Pontmercy when I must choose between love and war,

I’ll remember Chewbacca when I hear a tiger roar,

I’ll remember Kono Kalakua whenever I see a big strong man,

I’ll remember Princess Liea whenever I have a daring plan,

I’ll remember Padme Amidala when I fall so very deeply in love,

I’ll remember the Clone warriors when I see a military-plane above,

I’ll remember Mace Windu when I learn from those who are wiser than me,

I’ll remember Gavroche when I long for my world to finally be free,

I’ll remember Eponine when I walk home in the rain,

I’ll remember Faramir when I bury all my pain,

I’ll remember Darth Vader when my breath is long and slow,

I’ll remember Theoden when my life is full of woe,

I'll remember Castiel when I see a gentle white bird stretch its wings,

I'll remember Dean Winchester when I have to deal with the toughest of things,

I'll remember Sam Winchester when I try to fit in,

I'll remember Crowley when I'm tempted to sin,

I’ll remember Aragorn when I have to take the lead,

I’ll remember Gimli when I perform a courageous deed,

I’ll remember Eowyn when I feel I could be so much more,

I’ll remember Bombur when I hear a tremendous snore,

I'll remember Father Patrick McKenna when I kneel in devout prayer,

I'll remember the Illuminati when I gaze on St. Peter's Square,

I'll remember Kili Oakenshield when I brighten someone's day,

I'll remember Michael Myers when I go numb and my dreams fade to grey,

I'll remember Michael when I taste food against my tongue,

I'll remember Susan when my senses are all but gone,

I'll remember Bryan Mills when I make a call on the phone,

I'll remember Hachi when I see a stray puppy wandering alone,

I’ll remember Arwen when I make a sincere promise that I will never break,

I’ll remember Treebeard when I see a tall tree by a lake,

I’ll remember Dwalin when my temper flares,

I’ll remember Elrond when someone really cares,

I’ll remember Balin when I’m loyal and true,

I’ll remember these stories no matter what I go through.

~Written by StephenMcGarrett 5-0

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Of Trust And Betrayal by ShadowOfHapiness reviews
Sending Kili and Fili scouting the watchtower had only seemed natural, Thorin hadn't realized it was a trap and that he'd just literally offered one of his sister-sons to the Pale Orc. While physical wounds heal eventually, psychological scars can run deep, and being feared wasn't an outcome Thorin had ever expected when he'd ridden up to Ravenhill, much less by his own nephew.
Hobbit - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 12 - Words: 77,103 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 6/11/2017 - Published: 9/4/2015 - Thorin, Fíli, Kíli, The Master of Lake-Town
When Fire Doesn't Burn by Defender of the Dogma reviews
Anakin is dead. Killed by those who would extract information from his master. But Obi-wan can't survive without Anakin. Major character death. Major character angst. Not slash.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 465 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/29/2016 - Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan K. - Complete
More Than a Thousand Words by ABreathofLiterature reviews
This story is based upon the episodes "Once Upon a Time" and "Time and Memories". I felt an emotional connection with these episodes and the Lord gave me an inspiration to pen this tale. I have written this fan fiction, not only to unburden many of the emotions I am experiencing, but also to encourage anyone who feels there is no hope. There is always hope. Edited by a dear friend.
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,107 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/18/2016 - Steve M. - Complete
Frodo Baggins: An Unusual Hobbit by ABreathofLiterature reviews
Hi! I do not own the above picture, but give credit to the artist. This is not a story, but a summary of the hobbit Frodo Baggins and his journey to Mount Doom, as invented by J.R.R. Tolkien. I researched the facts pertaining to Frodo from the Lord of the Rings books, adding my own thoughts and "imaginative scenes". My goal is to show the reader what God can do through the weak.
Lord of the Rings - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 807 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/22/2015 - Complete
The Small Things by Ani-maniac494 reviews
When Gandalf the Grey met Bilbo the halfling boy, the future of Middle Earth changed forever. Hobbit movie-verse, one-shot.
Hobbit - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,552 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 12 - Published: 10/9/2015 - Gandalf, Bilbo B. - Complete
A High Price, For A Friend by ShadowOfHapiness reviews
Covers the events of the first movie. When Bilbo accepts to join Thorin's company, Fili makes it his job to look out for the hobbit, taking drastic measures which end up affecting his own health. Cornered by personal fears and pressure he puts on himself trying to strike up a friendship with Bilbo, Fili is slowly falling. Will our hobbit be able to help him before it's too late?
Hobbit - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 25 - Words: 72,236 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 56 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 9/4/2015 - Published: 1/6/2015 - Thorin, Bilbo B., Fíli - Complete
One day more by BeautyAndStrength reviews
On the eve of the Battle of the Five Armies, everyone involved sings of the war that is to arrive come dawn. A revision of "One Day More" from Les Miserables. Mainly movie verse.
Crossover - Hobbit & Les Misérables - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 568 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/5/2015 - Complete
The Worth of a Shirt by Book 'em Again reviews
When a crisis hits, Danny learns the true worth of his shirt.
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,212 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/21/2015 - Danny W. - Complete
Brothers by honu59 reviews
In the aftermath of one fateful phone call, Steve realizes that Danny is far more than just his second in command. An accompaniment to the season one episode "Once Upon a Time".
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,217 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/25/2015 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
The Courage of Hobbits by LadyWallace reviews
After an accident, Bilbo and Kili are captured by orcs, and Bilbo decides to buy Kili some time and gives himself up first. Light Bilbo whump. No slash
Hobbit - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,514 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 263 - Follows: 103 - Updated: 2/16/2014 - Published: 2/14/2014 - Bilbo B., Kíli, Thorin - Complete
Atheists in Foxholes by honu59 reviews
Danny has just seen his friend, Kurt Metzger, shot down in cold blood. Now the young detective is forced to spend the long hours of the night in solitary confinement, awaiting the same fate in the morning. A "MM" to the season 7 episode "The Young Assassins".
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,772 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Published: 9/3/2013 - Danny W. - Complete
Forgive Me, Brother by CelticRemedy reviews
The galaxy redefines the word 'Alone' for Obi-Wan Kenobi as he and his former Padawan, Anakin Skywalker, are sent on a mission with disastrous results to stop Count Dooku.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 888 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/18/2012 - Obi-Wan K., Anakin Skywalker - Complete
The Unseen Wound by Tanith2011 reviews
When Private Jessup McBride is suspected in a double homicide and takes Steve McGarrett hostage in the sugar cane field, Five-O races to find them before more blood is shed. Can Dan save Steve in time and bring in McBride, alive, or will he be the next victim in a deadly shoot out? Written as a challenge response in the tradition of, "And I Want Some Candy and a Gun That Shoots.'
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,175 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 4 - Published: 9/22/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Redemption by CelticRemedy reviews
Darth Vader knew how much Force lightning burned.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 596 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Published: 2/21/2012 - Anakin Skywalker, Luke S. - Complete
Figuring It Out by MMGHawaii reviews
A sequel to Yesterday Died and Tomorrow Won't Be Born. A tender short story where Steve and Danno begin to figure out and understand their relationship, and the depth of it; and how this has changed them as people.
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,506 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/31/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Tears by ForgottenMoonbeam92 reviews
The night after Qui-Gon is killed, Anakin wakes to find Obi-Wan by his bedside. Surprised that the reserved Jedi is seeking company, he hardly knows what to do. But sometimes, nothing needs to be done. Not slash!
Star Wars - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,493 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 207 - Follows: 31 - Published: 7/19/2008 - Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan K. - Complete
Wish I May, Wish I Might by Imadra Blue reviews
Young Anakin Skywalker had never known his Master, Obi-Wan Kenobi, to fall ill in the year he'd been apprenticed. So, it was something of a surprise when Obi-Wan suddenly sat down in the middle of lightsaber practice, a palm pressed to his forehead. Gen.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,579 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 197 - Follows: 23 - Published: 4/11/2008 - Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan K. - Complete
The War of the Ring by Darth Krewl reviews
Jedi Master ObiWan Kenobi had been betrayed. As he attempted to flee for his life, he found a portal to a planet far, far away and to a land called MiddleEarth, where a war not so different to the Clone Wars was about to begin...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 34 - Words: 129,120 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 255 - Follows: 72 - Updated: 3/12/2007 - Published: 2/12/2007 - Obi-Wan K. - Complete
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My Jane and I reviews
A Fanfiction based on the tragic episode "Beautiful Screamer". The thoughts and events leading up to and encompassing the murder. Danny couldn't believe it. He had just seen her that afternoon; yet now she was dead. When crisis hits one of Five-O's own, can the team help him brave this storm? Will they cling to God and each other, or stand alone to face this new threat in solitude?
Hawaii Five-O - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 24,791 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 3/1/2016 - Published: 2/18/2016 - Steve M., Danny W., Chin Ho K., Kono K. - Complete
The Death of Fili reviews
Fili's last thoughts and feelings before and during his death, told through his perspective. Fili never dared to hope he would survive when he stood alone in Ravenhill. He was glad he had sent his brother away, but being alone without Kili is harder than Fili thought... Especially when he is helpless and at the mercy of Azog The Defiler.
Hobbit - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,775 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/26/2015 - Fíli