hello all you writers in the making. i am beariemcdonald. my first story sucked because, well you know, i'm a beginner.

i need reviews to pump up my storys. i need you people to help a beginner in need.

i am a 'Percy Jackson and the Olympians kind of writer.

i kind of have the hots for Miranda cosgrove.

please! i need more reviews on how to make a good percabeth story!

i also play warhammer 40000. its a game where you build, paint and play with your army. (you make you own models and paint them how ever you want. you can name your army too.)

my favorite bands are FallOut boy and Good Charlotte. i love reading books and i love TV .

i don't really want to give out any more info about my personal life.

i need some more idea's for my new story "world travel series" please send more reviews and not the ones that are mean.( im not nine years old. and thepopesmoker is a moron.) but he is my brother though. he is very annoying. just kidding. you would think that a drug addict is my brother,bull crap. Please,Please review!

(the new picture is a space marine go the the johns room. i know what your thinking. you are asking "what's a space marine?" well it's part of a game i like to call warhammer40k. it is described up above.

i hope that who is ever reading this is nice enough to give me some good tips. like mini shot, and not to me aggressive tips like the ninth layer. i wouldn't be talking ninth layer. you don't even have any story's. so quiet your face! i think that who ever thinks that there storys are the best, are wrong. (i don't mean the nice people.) people that have mean nasty attitudes. don't think that I'm being mean. but it's true.

you are probably all wondering who is this mysterious bearie mcdonald. i will be glad to explain his story. here's how it goes.

bearie McDonald is a great architecture in the ancient times. he built temples, monuments, houses, mansions you name it. once he was walking in Egypt, looking for the pyramids of Giza. he started to walk inside and an old man said the place was haunted by the gods and the ancestors of those gods or some shit like that. so he went in anyway and didn't listen to that old man. he was in there for like two hours and eventually every body who goes in the Giza will never come out. they will go crazy and kill them selves. they stab there hearts and laugh like they enjoy it. savoring every last life. but bearie was smarter than that he dodged all of the traps and ghost. he finally got to the kings room. he saw the key of time. the one owned by kohann. that's how the space and time god unlocked our galaxy. bearie accidentally dropped the key into a boiling cauldron and he got sucked inside. he woke up in the future. he saw that the time on a newspaper. it said "new york 2010. so bearie wanted to find his past. so he built a tree house the size of one hundred sears towers and helped bring the world together. he aslo invented fascinating technology and helped new york be a futuristic place. bearie learned about present stuff and he became famous.