I honestly don't know what I'm doing

All I know is that I have a Transformers fanfiction/story that I think is really interesting.
I want to make an animated or animatic series or a web comic but I'm only one guy and I've tried that once a long time ago and it takes a lot out of you (especially with school).
So yeah if you like it share and if you wanna criticize please by all means LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK because I want it to be good.

Enjoy~