Woo, my one little story is fixed and looks ok now. It's suckety when the only story you have up isn't even showing right. Arigatou gozaimasu for the nice comments. Ne, I must admit, the main reason I brought the story over here was because I was uncertain about it. I made it a bit different, it has no dialogue at all (or the entire thing is a dialogue, depending on how you want to view it). I tried to leave some things open for speculation (even though I have decided what some of them mean to me. If anyone has any questions about it they can ask and I'll tell them how I viewed it). I think there's something weird in the air, because the day after I made this account a friend of mine went and told everyone to make accounts because -they- just gave in too, the same night that I did.

Also, there was a hawk flying around our place this morning. Tons of crows were chasing it. I wonder if it means something, I don't think I've ever seen a huge bird like that around here.