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Joined 09-21-10, id: 2546726, Profile Updated: 12-24-10

There is not much to say about me. I just like to read, so that´s the main reason for me to join FF. I don´t write as often as many of you, but someday I will post a story. Now, I just going around on FF reading and reviewing stories. I take reviewing seriously, so if I ever do something that counts as a flame, please tell me.

I usely reads Sonic fanfics, but I am always open for other stories, so please feel free to recommend stories to me. I would love it.

I usely go by different pionts when I´m reviewing. Those points are mainly:

1) Story/plot - Is it writen good? Easy to follow? Spelling errors?

Depending on what kind of fanfic(oneshot, twoshot or a serie), story has different influence on my overall thought about the story. Many good fanfics don´t have plot or story to follow. Spelling errors can be annoying to the reader, so try to correct you spelling by re-reading your story. By re-reading, you can also find faults in your story like plotholes and stuff like that.

2) Characters - Are they OOC(Out Of Character)? Are they behaving different? Have a different personalty? OC(Own Characters)?

Don´t get me wrong. OOC can be good depending on the story. I have read a few good stories with characters that are completly different. OOC is almost expected, especialy in romance fics. The reason for this is because in many games(for example Sonic The Hedgehog) there has never/rarely been any kind of romance or love scen. There for, the writer has no idea on how the characters will actualy react and that´s when OOC comes. But a good writer can see on the characters personalety and create a fanfic on how it plausible could happen.

If the characters are in a different enviroment or different style, OOC is completly normal. In a mystery/detective story for example, characters are maybe needed to be OOC. But, don´t get overboard. It´s good to keep their original personaleties as intact as possible.

I usely have no problems with OC. They are fun and gives a different perspective and a new feel to the story. But I don´t like it when they are overused or messes up the original story completly. There are, however, exceptions. There is a few fanfics that I have read that don´t have any original characters in it.

3) What kind of feel does the story give? Is it sensitive? Does it fill the readers need for a good story?

What kind of feel the story give is important for serious fanfics. The story needs to be capturing and hold the intrest of the reader.

The reader needs to be able to feel the situations that´s happening in the story.

It needs to have a satisfying end that don´t leave the reader with questions, if you don´t plan a sequle.

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Sonic TORTURE :D by tears over beers reviews
Music? Syrup? Yu-Gi-OH references? Spittle? Twihogs and Pottercats? That random git named Charlie? Unlikely pairings and the Jonas Brothers? That's right. We're back, baby.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Humor/Western - Chapters: 20 - Words: 64,969 - Reviews: 230 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 4/19/2012 - Published: 6/30/2010
The Case of the Golden Emerald by MSP841000 reviews
This story is about the Station Square Detective Agency, and is set in a 1950's style Station Square. The story is narrated by Knuckles. He and his 2 partners must stop the Robotnic Gang from stealing one of the Chaos Emeralds.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 8 - Words: 18,116 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/12/2011 - Published: 2/9/2010 - Knuckles, Sonic
All I want for Christmas is you, Knucklehead! by Midnightshadow001 reviews
Rouge still needed to get presents, buy a tree, help Amy set up for her party, and stop thinking about that echidna! What she didn't know was that her holidays were gonna be a blast...if she could live through the chaos first! Rouge x Knuckles Knouge
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 15,729 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 12/24/2010 - Published: 12/11/2010 - Rouge, Knuckles