![]() Author has written 4 stories for Transformers/Beast Wars, Transformers, and Star Wars. Name: It's a secret I guard with the utmost vigilance, but you can call me Anna. Age: Legal Adult between the ages of 18 and 21: capable of choosing to serve my country in the military, but incapable of consuming alcohol. About me: I love discussion, coffee, and friendship. I'm an aspiring artist, writer, lover, and thinker. This site is for writing, and therefore I am very interested in feedback and in being read. Please help me be a better writer as you read my work: give me constructive criticism and I'll bless your name. Give me crap opinion without foundation, however, and I'll ignore you. Just to be clear: Examples of Constructive Criticism: 1) The suggestion: "Here's the sense I got when reading your story; is that what you intended? No? Well then maybe you could be more clear." 2) Honest brutality: "I think right now your story needs some work. It's "X" and "X". Nothing personal, and I hope this proves helpful." 3) The Supported Opinion: "Given my experience in this field, which is "X", and that I can prove to you, I have some suggestions for improvement and some criticisms. I'll provide reasons for each." 4) Techical Flaws: "Your grammar is terrible... grab a book and brush up on it or get a beta." There are others that I may jot down eventually, but for now the bottom line you should come away with is this: No one knows everything. Everyone should be humble enough to admit they aren't good at something or screwed something up. Please help me see where my talent reaches, and where it could use improvement, but keep in mind that you are just as easily mistaken as I am. Criticism is more than just a jumble of preferences or opinions. As long as you have good will in your criticism and I have good will in receiving/replying to it, we should do just fine. In short: Please be Charitable, Good-willed, Honest, and Understanding in your reading and review of my work. (Also, here's my art for those who are interested): Stories: Kylo Ren - In Progress. Rated M for future disturbing elements, adult content, gore, psychological mayhem, and various other things. Romance/dark drama involving Kylo Ren and Rey of Jakku. Please forgive my limited Star Wars knowledge; I rarely venture into this particular fandom. Transformers High: A Man Named Peace - In Progress. Rated M. A Transformers "Bayverse" fix, loosely based on the bay movies. Contains inappropriate content, sexual references, graphic language, and domestic abuse. | |||||||
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