I write mainly for the Outsiders fandom and The Hobbit fandom.

If I have reviewed your Thorin fic:

Do not take offense if I am critical of your portrayal of Thorin. I really love Thorin's character. The complexity of who he is, the fact that he's been through the mill, but yet has endured and keeps enduring for his people. He's just a beautiful character. In my opinion, I think most of the Hobbit fandom see the mask Thorin tries to put on (cold and emotionless) and do not dig further beneath the surface, or see the fact that Thorin miserably fails. The mask falls a lot of the time. Thorin's emotions slip. Most of his decisions are emotional based. Thorin is angry with the Elves, so he doesn't want to go to Rivendell. Though the logical thing would be to go there because how in the heck is he going to read the map, right? Thorin's charge at Azog during the end of the first film was not the smartest thing to do, but he did it because he was emotional. Anger and rage are emotions. And Thorin's got a lot of that inside him. Thorin isn't comfortable with his emotions, addressing them, and probably doesn't even understand them well. So he would have trouble saying aloud how much a person means to him. I feel writers in the fandom tend to change Thorin's character (when writing an OC love story), so he could fit with their OC. One of the biggest criticisms I make and will stand by is that writers often tend to miss the hallmark of Thorin's character: he doesn't forgive, doesn't forget, and will hold a grudge until his death bed. Literally. I'm not trying to come off as a jerk if I criticize a writer's portrayal of Thorin. I am just trying to keep it canon. Why would anyone want to change Thorin's character? He's so awesome as he is.

-Pearl Primrose

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Stories In Progress:

Heroes

Summary: Rue's stuck in Middle-earth, meets Sir Swajesty Thorin Oakenshield through an epic bar fight, and learns Dwarves live as long as sea turtles, all the while on the run from some Malfoy wannabe during a quest to slay the Hungarian Horntail's ugly love child. Thorin/OC

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9686848/1/Heroes

Dreamboatshield

Summary: Trixie Oakenstruck, Mary-Sue from earth, goes on the quest to win the heart of a certain dreamboatshield, but will she be able to conquer King Under the Mountain's heart with a certain hobbit in the way? Crazy spin on girl falls in Middle-earth story and Thorin/OC pairings. Warning: this is not meant to offend. Inspired by Thorin Oakenshield's Majestic Diary by Fruitsie. Parody.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9665757/1/Dreamboatshield

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Milestones, personal dedication to Nothing Gold Can Stay

Mirror is cold

Her hardest hue to hold

She watches the hourglass

Ready to hear it blast

Shattered silver knives

Killing young lives

Blue December nights

Upon us like kites

Free us from earth

Trap us by birth

The sky looms

Ready to bloom

It is like a roller coaster ride

Flowing into the air in tide

A killer queen rises

So full of surprises

We fall back onto the ground

Everything so sound

The sun will set in May

Nothing gold can stay

Remember, Nothing Gold Can Stay

"I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character."-Martin Luther King Jr. (I have a dream speech)

"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."-The Great Gatsby

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible."-Lawrence of Arabia.

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"I was born this way." -Lady Gaga (Born this way)