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Joined 03-20-12, id: 3834071, Profile Updated: 05-25-12
Author has written 1 story for Mass Effect.

Ok, so I don't really know how to get started, so I'm just gonna jump right in. My name is John, and I'm from North Carolina in the US. I've always loved writing. Ever since I was younger I would write stories that I made up, often times writing extensions to books, stories, or games that I loved. Turned out there was a name for that thing I did; fan fiction. I wouldn't discover this until much, much later, however. I'm also an avid gamer/techie/geek. Gaming and computing technology is my passion, and I hope to be a computer engineer someday and work in the games industry. Anyhow, because I love games so much, you can pretty much expect lots of stories in the games department. I'm currently working on a Mass Effect fanfic, which will turn into a few sequel fanfics and probably even a prequel, and I've also got a Fallout fanfic in the planning stages.

I am by no means a professional writer. I love creative writing, but that doesn't necessarily mean I'm good at it. I'm pretty much learning as I go here, as these are the first works that I've shared with the public. That being said, I'm trying to use this website to hone my writing skills and improve my work before I begin writing original works, so any constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated. I also beg your pardon for the slow pace at which I churn out chapters. I'm a rather slow writer, as I like to think about my writing and critique it as I go to make it as good as possible. When I write a paragraph I usually end up rewriting it several times to make it as close to perfect as I can get it. And even then I usually think of a better way to phrase it later, after it's already published.

So, take a look at what I've written and drop a review, let me know what you think, how I can improve my writing. Or, if you aren't comfortable doing that where everyone can see it, or you just want to talk to me, drop me a line privately. I like to think I'm generally a friendly guy, so hit me up if it strikes your fancy. I'll do my best to answer any questions or just talk with you, if that's what you want.

Oh, and Talimancers FTW!

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For We Are Many by venomRED reviews
Rebuilt over two years by a terrorist organization he swore to destroy, Commander Shepard struggles to reclaim his past, while recruiting the best the galaxy has to offer in a bitter fight against the greatest threat the galaxy has ever faced. L/V/AC
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 43 - Words: 309,633 - Reviews: 579 - Favs: 601 - Follows: 519 - Updated: 8/27/2014 - Published: 10/23/2011 - Tali'Zorah, Shepard (M) - Complete
Adamo by Andrio reviews
A fanfic series focusing on Shepard and Tali's friendship, romance, and love, spanning Mass Effect 1 through speculative Mass Effect 3.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 35 - Words: 167,125 - Reviews: 756 - Favs: 1,090 - Follows: 757 - Updated: 4/29/2014 - Published: 5/30/2010 - Tali'Zorah, Shepard (M) - Complete
Mass Effect 3: The Truth by itz LWM reviews
Alternate ending to Mass Effect 3. Happy ending. Picks up just after the Crucible fires. MShep/Tali. My closure to the Series.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,083 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 6 - Published: 4/22/2012 - Shepard (M), Tali'Zorah - Complete
Birthdays and Anniversaries by CoMo290 reviews
Shepard is having trouble letting go of his past with an upcoming anniversary, and Tali struggles with the perfect gift for his upcoming birthday. Set between Mass Effect 2 and the events of Arrival/ME3.
Mass Effect - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 21,788 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 100 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 4/20/2012 - Published: 4/1/2012 - Shepard (M), Tali'Zorah - Complete
Razor's Edge by Tairis Deamhan reviews
Mass Effect 2 novelization, the life of one spectre that's seen more than his share of the galaxy's dark side. If you've already died once the question becomes what's worth living for? It's the question that will have to be answered to save a galaxy.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 37 - Words: 260,290 - Reviews: 431 - Favs: 1,115 - Follows: 425 - Updated: 3/11/2011 - Published: 6/13/2010 - Shepard (M), Tali'Zorah - Complete
Mass Effect: Awakening reviews
O.C. insert told from third person omniscient. Covers ME1. John Rettinger serves on the SSV Normandy SR-1 as chief engineer when Shepard introduces him to his new subordinate, a quarian named Tali'Zorah. M mostly for swearing, plus mild sexual themes.
Mass Effect - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 23,258 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 6/30/2012 - Published: 3/22/2012 - Tali'Zorah, Shepard (M)