This account is officially dead. I'm so sorry for doing this so suddenly, but I really CAN'T put up with writing fanfiction any longer. I'm busy, I rarely have time for myself, and I'm sorryto say this, but I definately don't have time for fanfiction anymore. No, none of my stories will ever be published anywhere else. If you find something similar, NO, it isn't mine. I'm sorry. Last but not least, thankyou to all my past reviewers and fans for putting up with me and my lackadaisical work habits. I know that some of you probably are wondering what happened to Cherry, Tawny, Renetta, and Amy. Let's just say, they're horrible little Mary-Sues who deserve to die. Little Mary-Sues that were invented to play my part in the Beyblade series, Mary-Sues who were perfect little girls. I'm starting to hate the four myself...let's see my rendition of each now, okay? Cherry: typical smartass, with the bad-girl attitude and hot temper, and able to fight without breaking a sweat Tawny: typical shy girl-next-door, can get annoying but is likeable Renetta: Little Miss Normal, meaning not as attractive as the others, but is around to make them look better Amy: Superficial teenager, into brand names, blonde hair, and is a SMART blonde And...as a bonus Jacqueline: typical Little Miss Bitch, who goes against the girls because they have the boys she wants...and ends up making the girls look waaaay better than herself I'm starting to think...after deleting my story, I have soooo many criticisms for myself. THINGS THAT WERE VEEEERY MARY-SUEISH IN MY STORY: 1. Jacqueline is too much of a bitch. I don't think anyone's like that in real life. 2. I hate to say this, but Cherry is too...obvious. Everyone knows what she's going to do, everyone knows that she's a fighter who can beat up ten people without breaking a sweat. She eats a lot, but manages to be fit. 3. The Renetta and Kain scene was just...waaaaaay to typical. I mean, skating and falling and kissing? Not a good combination. 4. It's veeeeery typical to have the shyest girl do something no one expects, such as eating a crapload of food, but is still described by the author (me) as PETITE. Tawny and Kai, anyone? 5. Something about the stoic, brooding character ALWAYS magically falling for the shy girl at first site. Tawny and Kai again? 6. Kai and Tala singing. Need I say more? I'd say that Ozuma and Kain are already pushing it. 7. No matter how self-centered Cherry is, there is NO WAY she'd rather spend a week with someone she doesn't like just to make Jacqueline mad. She's only human. 8. Amy is about THIS close to being a blonde bimbo, but she HAS to be a tiny bit better than them, because that's what Tala likes, which leads us to the next point. 9. OMGWTFBBQ? Tala likes GIRLS! 10. OMGWTFBBQ?~?~?~ Kai likes girls too? O_O I'm so disappointed with myself for mutilating Kai and Tala's personalities. I'm even ashamed for inventing non-existant personalities for Kain and Ozuma, just because they don't appear enough in Beyblade. But...that's a disappointing for Beyblade and Mary-Sue fans, right? What really happened: AFTER THE WEEK Ozuma and Cherry decided to give 'dating' a shot. Meanwhile, Renetta was already dating Kain, Tawny was dating Kai, and Amy was dating Tala. No surprise, right? Fans all over the world hate the girls. Hate mail found their way to the girls' houses and school dormitories. Starting to feel a bit uneasy, the guys each hired a bodyguard for their girlfriends, especially when they weren't around to protect them. Meanwhile, Jacqueline, who just happened to be Daniel's niece, sneaks into Ozuma's apartment and sticks in a photo album of her..um..very revealing pictures. Cherry sees them, Cherry gets mad, Cherry dumps Ozuma's sorry ass. Ozuma gets mad and pursues Cherry, kisses her, yadda yadda yadda. They get back at at Jacqueline (come on, use your imaginations!) and they lived happily ever after. THE END There, wasn't that nice. Hope you guys don't miss me TOO much. Sayonara~~ |