For those of you who enjoyed my story don't worry, it will be back, I have removed it to make some punctuation and grammar
changes, because one person who was kind enough to say that they hated my story, pointed out that I am very bad at these things, but by doing so they are helping me improve,
I would like to take this moment now, to thank that person who said that they hated my story, for helping me become a better writer.
And remember this:
Everybody is entitled to their own opinion so don't feel bad if someone doesn't like what you've wrote/done
( I recently learned this one, when I read my first and only flame and burst into a fit of tears, being an emotional person and all)
So R/R my story when it's back and improved

I'm out,
Rayne Summit