![]() Author has written 3 stories for Naruto, and Harry Potter. What is up Name: DrunkenBunny (Not all of us are sober) Age: 19 Location: A house near a street; in a town; in a county; in a state; in a country; near a ocean Types of stories I read: M/T rated because they seem more my age group Genres I read: Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Sci-Fi, and Supernatural. So I now know that I like to write, but can't so these are the type of stories that I like to read. Naruto: Next Generation; AU; OC; Re-telling story Fairy Tail: OC; OC; OC; AU; New Guilds My Ideal line of Hokages First - Hashirama Senju (So bad ass I could never changes his place) Second - Hiruzen Sarutobi (Tobirama is strong and all but nothing stands out about him beside creating two great jutsus (I wrote this before Tobirama entered into the great war I see now that Tobirama is f-ing smart and without him there would be no Leaf), while Hiruzen is awesome and is known as God of Shinobi basically all I did here was move him up one place) Third - Jiraiya ( I know what your thinking if Hiruzen was second than shouldn't Minito be third, my answer is hold your damned horses. Jiraiya is one of the strongest people and the manga/anime and would make sense if he became Hokage before his disciple plus he was one of the nominees before Tsunade) Fourth - Minito Namikaze (Told you to hold them horse, I deiced to keep Minito exactly were he was in the first place and it makes sense any way) Fifth - Kakashi Hatake (First i know I removed Tsunade but seeing the war happen I see Kakashi would have been a way stronger Hokage and and would have matched up the the other expectations) Sixth - Naruto Uzumaki (Well this should be obvious) Seventh - Konohamaru Sarutobi (It would make sense after Naruto for Konohamaru to be the next pick; his grandfather, was Hokage, his Ideal sort of teacher was Naruto Hokage, uncle was part of the Twelve Guardian Ninja, he was just grown for greatness) This would also in my eyes make it a line of student teacher of the Hokages, plus there all bad ass Fav Fan Made Team AU Team that Naruto, Itachi, and Neji are all born same time and on same team In this usual profile Naruto does not have the Nine-tail and instead gets the Rinnegan Therefore it becomes a team of the three Great Dojutsus Fav pairings Karin & Sasuke (There kid would be born with the Rinnegan how f-ing awesome would that be.) Hinata & Naruto (Thinking of it if they had a kid their child would also have the Rinnegan too.) More to come? My thoughts on Naruto manga/anime My thoughts on Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki AKA The Sage of Six Paths I actually think that the Sage is down played in the Manga/Anime and should play a bigger role and his mythology should be expanded on. Furthermore about his kids the how they are the ancestors of the Senju and Uchiha Clans. I will expand on each child than I will tell the relationship on how they are related to the Uzumaki Clan. First I believe that that each of the Sage’s paths were one from of the six most basic Jutsu types: Ninjutsu (the art of using element based jutsu), Genjutsu (the art of using illusion based jutsu), Taijutsu (the art of using physical based jutsu), Fūinjutsu (the art of using sealing based jutsu), Senjutsu (the art of using sage based jutsu), and finally Bukijutsu (the art of using weapon based jutsu). Than the Uchiha Clan ancestor, like in the mythos of the manga/anime I he is the first son of Hagoromo, ‘born from his eyes’ in which he inherits his powerful chakra and spiritual energy, that translates in justu terms to Ninjutsu (powerful chakra) and Genjutsu (spiritual energy) also he inherits the eyes obviously which is known as Dōjutsu. Next the Senju Clan ancestor, again like in the mythos he is the second son of Hagoromo, this son is “born from his body” in which he inherits his powerful life force and physical energy, in jutsu terms I translate this into Senjutsu (powerful life force) and Taijutsu (physical energy) also he inherits the ability to use combine elements known as kekkei genkai. This is where the Uzumaki come in finally. As you can see there is two ‘paths’ that are still available Fūinjutsu and Bukijutsu. This is where I change the mythos, here I say that the Sage also had a daughter, she was “born from his mind” in which she inherits his knowledge of all things and skill of the metal. Here I translate these into Fūinjutsu (knowledge of all things) and Bukijutsu (skill of the metal) also she can make new skills which I translate as Hiden. We continue the basic version where the second son gets his father’s blessing, leaving the first son with nothing besides betrayal. Two sons fight yada yada yada, you know the rest. Any AU story by me will probably have this version with the Uzumaki in it. My thoughts on Sakura Truth be told Sakura is one of my least favorite characters. In the begging of the story line they introducted her as a Saskue fan-girl with a bunch a brains smarts that pounded on Naruto (the main character of the story). From that she got no better, as the story went on Naruto and Saskue got stronger and stronger and all Sakura did was bitch about how they kept getting stronger than her. Once Naruto and Saskue goes off and trains to get stronger with Jiraiya and Orochimaru she some how gets Tsunade to train her. When we come back from the time skip she somehow got super strong and is feared by everyone. Another reason I don't like Sakura is the fact that she is on that team. Hear me out first, Naruto's whole class that past is full of clan heirs and she is just some random civilian. I would have probably like her better if she was the heir of some type of clan, that why her sudden power up could have been justified. I know my reasons for hate is not all that said, but they are my reasons, and i dont give a shit what you say.All that being said I will probable not have her in any of my fanfiction unless her presence is mandatory. Challenges Konoha Nine: The Jinchurikis Ideal from The Ark by Wilkins75 Review I got this ideal while reading Wilkins75 story The Ark where The Tail-Beast are more than just the Nine we know be a whole civilization and they must merge with people to live, thus creating a village of Jinchurikis. Summary In my story what if the Hashirama Senju gathered all of the tailed beast, but instead of just giving them away what if he kept them all and gave one each the leaders of the clans that joined the leaf first. Telling them to pass on the beast to the clan leader of each generation. Rules That being said I am assuming that all of the nine are in a class that have clan leaders including Naruto (can be the air of the Namikaze or the Uzumaki), Kiba (has an older sister or not doesn't matter as long as Kiba is the clan leader); and Sasuke this is a predicament for me on one side because he is an Uchiha it could be said that the nine tails was originally theirs but the whole Madara incident (first one) Hashirama took it and gave it to Mito thus the nine tails becoming an Uzumaki tailed beast. Or they had another beast and Itachi had it and gave it to Sasuke doesn't matter to me you're the one writing it. This also means that Sakura who does not even belong to a clan must not have a tailed beast. Therefor you can create an OC of one of the clans that already belong to the leaf. I also created some clans and you can look at them if you want just pm me. Ideals All this being said I'm not saying rewrite the whole beginning Naruto, just alter it a little Minato and Kushina can still be dead and Naruto still an orphanage. This also means that they don't all have to be super strong, Neji can still beat up Hinata. And the Legendary Sannin is still Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru. Also what would be cool but not mandatory is that they all get features for the beast that are inside of them. Like Naruto with the marks on his cheeks. It would be logical for Naruto to keep the Nine-Tails, but it's not a must. Other than that it is free range to who gets what beast and how they use it. For example if the Jinchuriki of the Three-tails gave them exceptional Water Release jutsu. (Than you could say something like the Three-tails were kept by the Senju and Hashirama gave it to his brother and then you would just make somehow that the Senju have a kid in Naruto's grade maybe Tsunade's grandchild or something.) If you need help creating OC clan pm and I'll see if I can help. PM me if you wish to accept this challenge so I can see your story and post a link on my profile. More to come? |
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