Hi! I am topnotchgirl.

This account is purely for constructive criticism.

Now before you get all ticked off because you recieved a flame/concrit and decide to write a nasty pm to me, take a moment to think.

I'm not the kind of person who goes around telling everybody their story sucks and they should just stop writing. I'm not cocky, conceited, egotistical etc...I've received con crit too and I know that sometimes it hurts.

You post your work on FF and sooner or later someone is going to come around and say something you don't like to hear. Well you know what, that's the internet for ya...so get over it! Don't become all miserable and crap, do something about it if you really care about your story.

Here are some helpful tips/links for you:

Get a BETA for your story! I know they're hard to get, but once you've got one chances are your story will improve.

Different ways to say said

He said "Use something else other than said you dolt!"

Why you might receive a falme/concrit

- U spel thngs lke ths bcuz ur lazy

-Your OC is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu (Incase you don't what that means, MS and GS are characters who are too perfect, don't have any flaws, or any enemies and is/are liked by everyone.)

- Grammer/sentence structure

- Your plot

Ciao

~TNG