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![]() Author has written 13 stories for Super Smash Brothers, Pokémon, Harvest Moon, Vocaloid, Naruto, and Ouran High School Host Club. Whale hiya! Welcome to my profile page! Well since you're here you probably A. Are trying to stalk me B. Just wanted to know who's the amazingly gorgeous person is right here ;) im jk but either one you choose let me just make this worth yer while, okie? Okie. My favorite animes: 1. Hetalia 2. Black Butler 3. Soul Eater Favorite Singers/Bands: 1. Ariana Grande 2. Linkin Park 3. Bruno Mars I'm such a happy person and to increase my awesomeness I'm going to give you 4 awesome tips on how to make a GREAT story! ;D HOOKS- What makes a story so interesting that gets us glued to it makes us wanting more? The answer is simple...HOOKS! It's that one line in the beginning that keeps us going at it and reels the readers in.It's the line that stirs the imagination and makes us think. For example,"She said she was a witch but I didn't believe her."Doesn't that one sentence catch your attention?Makes you want to read more from the beginning of the story all the way to the end. Dialogue-. When you converse, do you always use proper english? No, at least ‘I’ don’t. The familiar slang and phonic words that you hear in everyday speech, are exactly what makes such great dialogue when writing a story. Why? Well, because it sounds natural. It reads like two or more people having a normal conversation. If we spoke perfect english, without all the little quirks of everyday speech, we’d sound like robots! Some people do write and speak like that, and to me, they sound very . . . ‘boring’. When writing dialogue, it should reflect the description of your character. If you were writing a part for a robot, you could write . . . “My name is Bill. What is your name?” Sounds pretty flat doesn’t it. A real person (or character) doesn’t speak like that at all. How about this . . . “Name’s Bill. What’s yours?” Doesn’t that sound more natural, like a real person speaking? Try writing a short story using nothing but dialogue. Think! Can you picture what the characters look like, just by the way they talk? Great Stories have great dialogue. Plot-Pretty simple actually.No plot No story. Make an awesome,grab-my attention sorta plot! Pace-You always start off with a bang, then you slow them down with a slow song, just to give them a chance to meet people or characters. The pace toward the end should be fast and breath-taking. You must end with a bigger and better bang than the one you started with, make them feel that reading (or dancing) was worth their time and effort. They must be left with a feeling of total satisfaction. Oh, and a word of warning . . . never make the reader experience the climax of the story through the eyes of someone else. For example, a ‘flashback’, or a ‘journal’ that was found and read at the end of the story, which reveals the climatic end. Your reader needs to feel all the emotion of the climax first hand. You owe it to them and the Great Story you're about to write. Things about ME!!!!: 1. I played the PIANO for 10 yrs.!!!!! 2. I loooove M and Ms 3. I have a slight obsession with trail mix tbh 4. I am a super awko taco v 5. My favorite emoticon: :D If u haven't notices already... 6. I love people and making friends with anyone! 7. 'm the kinda person who would walk out the house with my shirt inside out and never notice until someone tells me A sad poem that heard somewhere: I feel you in the morning You'd been around forever Cause by what you bestowed Although you've left Enjoy now your long waited reward 15 THINGS TO DO AT WAL-MART 1. Set all the alarm clocks in Electronics to go off at 5-minute intervals. 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