I have made a Steven Universe roleplay forum! I would appreciate it you could join. I'm also in need of mods :3

Ello! It's been a while since I've been on this site, and I've resolved to start fresh! I rage over the smallest of details so if any reviews I give are somewhat harsh, know it's not because your story is terrible or I hate you or whatnot. (However, I would appreciate if you take my words into consideration.)

And don't worry! I'll be uploading stories soon and coming up with a better name so I'll actually have grounds to criticize your work.

She/her please. Previously known as 'beehomie'.

Requests are open! I'll be posting a big fat oneshot collection soon, so feel free to send in prompts, shippings, and such!

I can also do cover commissions. You can PM me for details if you're in need of a cover for your story.

UPCOMING

Work in progress stories that are currently in planning. Besides Warriors Holidays, it will be a while before these are posted.

Crystalised- Shadows are normal, natural things. Mimic your every move, grow longer, grow dimmer, these are typical actions of shadows. Everyone has these perfectly explainable, lackluster things, who never think to move on their own- or think at all. But of course, Alderpaw(placeholder name) had to ruin this as well. (Main story, will be out the soonest.)

Warriors Holidays! Reboot- Have you ever wondered what would happen if Greystripe ran his mouth about Thanksgiving? Are ordainments edible? Will Ivypool and Jayfeather ruin Christmas? Follow Acornpaw and Firepaw as they are victims to WARRIORS HOLIDAYS! Well technically, its Twoleg holidays... whatever. (You can read the original story here. Takes place immediately after.)

One-shot collection thing

Missing(working title)- Swanna Tail has never been particularly important. The idea that everyone is the main character in their own life just doesn't sit with her. Who' d want to write about the boring, uncreative, broody girl mourning over her dead boyfriend? But when she meets Lionel Tigris, the strange champion of the Thunderclap Academy, her inner detective kicks in. As Swanna investigates the mysterious circumstances of Andrew's death, the stakes rise and soon she's drawn into a terrible plot. A new take on Warriors High. (Up for adoption.)

Immaculate(working title)- For a hundred years, they thought they were safe. For a hundred years, Phyrria has been in an uneasy, bloody peace. For a hundred years, the legacy of the Dragonets of Destiny is scorned at in confidentiality. And for the first time in a hundred years, an animus NightWing emerges from his stone prison. (Raw idea, don't expect the story to be out soon. Dystopian AU)

RANDOM RANTS

6/2/16- It's so lazy for writers to just make all their villains psychos. I LITERALLY FOUND SOMEBODY WHOSE VILLAINS WERE in QUOTES:

A psycho that wants to rule everything

A psycho that wants to destroy everything

A psycho that is the girlfriend of the guy that wants to rule everything

What kind of motivations are those?! And are this seriously their only defining traits? Why not just roll them all into a mega un-original original character if there's no distinction between them anyways?! Villains should be just as interesting as the heroes. The villains should be likable in their own right. You can't just make them randomly a psycho and expect your readers to roll with it except when you're Erin Hunter. Then you can throw any crap at them and theyll still get a huge fanbase.

Speaking of Erin Hunter, Vicky doesn't seem to know how to make a villain... When was the last time we got a good villain from her? How about never?

1. Tigerstar- Literally his only traits were: ambitious, ruthless, with a victim complex thrown in as a cherry on top. His backstory was nonexistent, his motivations were extremely vague and unclear, and he kept rearing his ugly, un-characterized head even after he was killed. I know the Into the Wild was intended to be a stand-alone novel and Tigerstars backstory wouldn't fit in, but once they decided to do more they should've at least put a little effort into making him an actual character.
2. Brokenstar- He had very little screen-time, so I don't really blame him for being Finnivus gone wrong.
3. Scourge- See my rant about the psycho villains.
4. Hawkfrost- Like Bramblestar, but evil and doesn't have a mind of his own!
5. Tigerstar AGAIN.
6. Ashfur- I was supposed to go to the Dark Forest, but the fans saved me because they saw that I loved too much!
7. Mapleshade- I went to the Dark Forest because I loved too much. Too bad I had no fans ;--;
8. DEAD CATS. Enough said.

The Erin Hunters make best characters 400/10 no competition GG