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 About Author Pen name: Exige8002 [Just call me Exige] Favorite anime: Code Geass, Gundam 00, Sekirei, Naruto Favorite cartoon: Avatar TLAB, Ben 10. Club 1. Suzaku Hater Club - joined on 24 September 2016. Link: myanimelist.net/clubs.php?cid=7879 Beta Reading & You I found one interesting article when I'm browsing the internet for a beta myself. Anway, you all know who beta-reader is right. It someone who is there to proofreading your story before you publish them to the public. As fanfic author, this is an advantage. If you get a really good beta, they can really help you point out some weakness in your stories like grammar, plot and more. This article cover all there is about the beta-reader, bute there are more. One thing this article caught my interest is how you as writer interact to beta-reader and vise verse. I thought I just share it for my fan to read. This is a copy of the article. You can read the article from the link below. Part 1: fanfic101.com/art-betareading01.htm Part 2: fanfic101.com/art-betareading02.htm As a writer/ author Be clear as to what you're looking for--over-all general thoughts of the plot or characterization, or do you want line edits for spelling, grammar, and punctuation, or do you want it all? If you have questions about certain parts, don't mention them before the reader reads it--that may prejudice them. Ask after the fact, so they can give you their honest reaction. Be clear about your experience as a writer; is this your first ever fic, your first fic in this fandom, or are you an experienced writer? Be clear about how you'd like to receive your beta comments and corrections back--do you want the beta to mark up what you sent so you can compare it to the original and make corrections there? Or do you want the beta to make a list in a return e-mail or on a separate document?This is one of the places my beta read of this person's fanfic got me into trouble--I am an active romance writer, therefore I judge contests and perform critiques for my fellow writers. I was taught to go paragraph by paragraph, highlighting the issue needing a fix (but not fixing it), and then to comment about it right under the paragraph and change the font color to blue so it's easier to differentiate from the text of the story itself. When us romance writers get back a contest entry or critique--we compare documents and make changes in our original or working version. Anyhow, this is also how I received a beta read back from another gal I had a look at my work. You may want to do a trial beta read--just send a chapter and see if the beta reader understands and provides what you're looking for. If not, thank him or her and move on. Please send the best version of your work you have (see the companion article on beta reading). Don't get pissy. It's hard to infer how a person is writing something. Always be polite and refrain from getting into a pissing contest with the person who betaed your work. Even if it wasn't what you wanted, or you disagree, always remember the reader took time out of their life to help you.As a beta-reader Make sure you understand what the reader is looking for. You may want to rephrase what the reader has said so that he or she knows you understand what thy want. If you are confused, ask until you're certain. Make sure you provide only what the writer has asked for. If there's other stuff, just mention it, and ask if the writer is interested in additional comments. Make sure you understand how the writer is expecting back your comments/corrections/thoughts. Feel out the reader on his or her sensitivity level; then be as honest as you can, but be tactful. Sometimes that's really hard, so find something positive to comment on and leave it at that. Never hesitate to praise the good stuff, not just mark the bad stuff. If it’s funny, say so. If it’s a clever turn of phrase, say so. If they’ve nailed the characterization, say so. If it’s a great plot idea, say so.Writer Inspiration Quote 1. You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. ~Jodi Picoult~ 2. If you wish to be a writer, WRITE. ~Epictetus~ 3. Fiction gives us second chance that life denies us. ~Paul Theroux~ The Rules of Writing 1. Write Crappy First Drafts 2. Words Don't Bleed. Cut Them. 3. Write Now. Edit Later. 4. There are NO mistakes, Only Creative Opportunities. 5. Don't Think, Just Write. |
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Coming Of Age by Freestyle 763 reviews
Third year ronin Ryu has a shaking morning, his first sight the busty brunette clothed in a white veil. He finds himself to be part of a dangerous game, is bonded with someone, and life as he knew it ends and something new begins in its place. Leave your thoughts. Rated M just in case. With romance and everything else in between. Poll on profile! Vote for a whole bunch! Thanks!
Sekirei - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 128 - Words: 652,690 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 234 - Follows: 200 - Updated: 5/30 - Published: 12/29/2013 - Higa I., No. 10/Uzume, No. 16/Toyotama
Naruto of Chaos by jean010 reviews
A man that searches for redemption. A child who's family neglects him. A change in fate that will shock the Elemental Nations to the core. This is the tale of two people that will change everything, one as a teacher and the other one as a student. NarutoxHarem. Neglected!Naruto. Strong!Naruto. Fem!Sasuke. Crossover with Fairy Tail. Other minor Crossovers
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 40 - Words: 349,636 - Reviews: 2175 - Favs: 4,400 - Follows: 4,469 - Updated: 11/16/2018 - Published: 8/12/2014 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Fū, Naruko U.
Desert Flower by NXSE reviews
Naruto is banished from the village in a way worse than imagined. Temari finds him in the middle of nowhere, on the verge of killing himself and helps him out of his despair. Will Konoha ever regret ever letting him go? Chakra chains, Hiraishin and Space-time ninjutsu as well as seal master Naruto. Naruto x Temari. Konoha slight bashing.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 21 - Words: 129,090 - Reviews: 3663 - Favs: 7,384 - Follows: 8,052 - Updated: 5/1/2018 - Published: 3/17/2016 - [Naruto U., Temari]
Oppositeverse: The Child Genius by Miraculous Psychic Hero 100 reviews
Seno is a young teenage genius who hates the fact that he lost the chance to have a childhood. So he's making up for lost time in the present. However, when he begins to run into Sekirei and becomes Ashikabi, will he still be able to act like a child or will he have to accept that that part of his life is over, and he needs to grow up? OC/Harem. 2nd in Oppositeverse
Sekirei - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,233 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 120 - Follows: 127 - Updated: 4/29/2018 - Published: 4/4/2017 - No. 04/Karasuba, No. 104/Haihane, No. 84/Yashima, OC
Fairy's Guardian by YagamiNguyen reviews
Acnologia attacked Tenroujima and Fairy Tail. In their last moment of hope, First Guild Master Mavis Vermillion prayed for the return of a legend, to save Fairy Tail's from their end. He was known by many names during his life...The Demon Brat, The Hero of the Fourth Great Shinobi War, the Nanaidaime Hokage of the Leaf. But now, he was known as the Fairy's Guardian. DISCONTINUED!
Crossover - Naruto & Fairy Tail - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 41 - Words: 230,472 - Reviews: 4204 - Favs: 4,259 - Follows: 4,166 - Updated: 12/7/2017 - Published: 10/5/2015 - Naruto U., Mirajane S., Sayla, Irene B.
Naruto : Abandoned Child by NXSE reviews
AU : Naruto was abandoned at birth and everything comes to light after the Wave Mission. Naruto decides to quit as a shinobi of the leaf. Will Naruto be able to forge his own path through his father's legacy and protect it? Pairing: NarutoxSatsuki (Fem!Sasuke). His family tries to make amends for their mistakes, but will he accept them? And will Hiruzen be able to stop him in leaf?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 99,843 - Reviews: 1179 - Favs: 3,816 - Follows: 4,111 - Updated: 11/28/2017 - Published: 2/29/2016 - [Naruto U., Sasuke U.] Hiruzen S., Kushina U.
Naruto : Uchiha Chronicles by NXSE reviews
An Uchiha born in the early years of the village? A simple thing right? But what if it was our knuckle headed hero from a timeline quite a few years in the future. Watch as Naruto shakes up the timeline by being born into a time he wasn't in the manga and shakes up the very foundations of canon as we know it, all the while finding love with a certain slug princess of said timeline!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 177,182 - Reviews: 1684 - Favs: 3,839 - Follows: 4,203 - Updated: 11/5/2017 - Published: 8/20/2016 - [Naruto U., Tsunade S.] Tobirama S., Mito U.
I AM THE LAW by LordofWar245 reviews
Linus is a Knight sent by his order to clean the streets of Tokyo, Japan. Or so they thought. Unknown to him, Tokyo is under a new order, name, and is a place for a deadly game he is about to be in created by a madman. However, Linus is the Lawbringer and he will bring the law to this deadly game. OC centric OCHarem Reviews are needed damn it!
Sekirei - Rated: M - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,120 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 6/1/2017 - Published: 4/6/2017 - No. 10/Uzume, No. 84/Yashima, OC, No. 73/Namiji
Life in Konoha's ANBU by Shezza reviews
ANBU!Naruto. Drafted into ANBU at a young age, Naruto is guided to the path of a Captain. Leader of Team Sigma, the Hokage's Personal Guard, Naruto will lead his team and defend his Village to the best of his ability. Threats besiege the Land of Fire from all sides, and only Naruto stands before them...
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 53 - Words: 370,954 - Reviews: 5084 - Favs: 8,001 - Follows: 7,560 - Updated: 8/6/2016 - Published: 4/1/2012 - Naruto U., Hiruzen S.
Naruto - Bonds Anew by Dreaming of the Phoenix reviews
Something completely unforeseen occurs in the Sekirei Plan. How will it change the entire thing? Read to find out. Complete. 2nd story! Forgive chapter 6 please.
Crossover - Naruto & Sekirei - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 94,259 - Reviews: 963 - Favs: 3,003 - Follows: 2,706 - Updated: 6/27/2016 - Published: 1/24/2015 - Naruto U., No. 01/Miya A. - Complete
Ashikabi No Shinobi by The Engulfing Silence reviews
Unable to move onto the next life, Uzumaki Naruto travels the world. He comes back to Japan, the place where Konoha once stood, and soon finds himself sucked into a game of battling busty women. It all started when a girl fell on top of him. Literally.
Crossover - Naruto & Sekirei - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 43 - Words: 645,490 - Reviews: 6087 - Favs: 8,550 - Follows: 6,662 - Updated: 5/1/2015 - Published: 1/24/2012 - Naruto U. - Complete
A New Kind of Ashikabi by The 19th Angel reviews
Tetsuya is by most accounts, an ordinary boy. He lives with his uncle Seo Kaoru. Until he meets and wings the Sekirei known as Uzume. He soon finds himself embroiled in a contest, the likes of which he could never have imagined. Now he must fight to keep Uzume, Akitsu and any other Sekirei he wings with him. OCxHarem. Slight AU at the beginning.
Sekirei - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 96,050 - Reviews: 199 - Favs: 364 - Follows: 268 - Updated: 11/5/2013 - Published: 2/2/2013 - No. 01/Miya A., OC - Complete
of Daisuki and Aishteru by Fraulein Kreuz24 reviews
Tezuka likes Fuji, but Fuji doesn't like Tezuka like that... Fuji loves Tezuka... credits to the creator of the awesome cover - it's absolutely stunning
Prince of Tennis - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 43,083 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 12/2/2012 - Published: 6/6/2012 - Fuji S., Tezuka K. - Complete
The Revival by yesman55 reviews
My R3 version. Lelouch wakes up and finds that he has become immortal. What will Lelouch do now that he is immortal? The world seems to be at peace, but how long will that last? Kalulu. Completed.
Code Geass - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 33 - Words: 42,440 - Reviews: 175 - Favs: 453 - Follows: 203 - Updated: 1/24/2011 - Published: 11/1/2010 - [Lelouch L., Kallen S.] - Complete
A Flower's Friendship A Fox's Loneliness by Suna No Ken reviews
Naruto finally got a date with Sakura but a sudden mission with Ino brings them closer. Not that he doesnt mind. But as Naruto and Sakura try to start a romance will Ino steal Naruto's heart? Or will it be the other way around? No NaruSaku. Preview up.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 21,533 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 128 - Follows: 145 - Updated: 12/5/2010 - Published: 5/26/2010 - Ino Y., Naruto U.
The Master of Discipline by lord of the land of fire reviews
Can one ordinary man bring light into darkness and change the heart of a woman who believes only in violence? How much can one man really accomplish? Can he change the world?
Sekirei - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 25 - Words: 56,973 - Reviews: 724 - Favs: 865 - Follows: 348 - Updated: 9/14/2009 - Published: 8/10/2009 - Complete
Minato's One and Only Wife by lord of the land of fire reviews
Minato's ordinary life changes forever when he meets a sekirei and is drawn into the struggle that is the Sekirei Plan. To say nothing of the challenges of being with the lovely and angry Tsukiumi, Minato's one and only wife.
Sekirei - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 27 - Words: 63,680 - Reviews: 654 - Favs: 952 - Follows: 350 - Updated: 8/6/2009 - Published: 6/24/2009 - Complete