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Joined 05-28-19, id: 12393472, Profile Updated: 08-27-19
Author has written 1 story for One Piece.

I don't see any real significance to putting effort into your profile, so just know I see myself as a pretty chill dude, I get bored easily if I'm not interested in what I'm currently doing and I also procrastinate a little too much. I don't give a shit if you dislike anything I write and if by chance it somehow personally offended you then don't read it.


Current Works

I'm currently working on a couple of stories, but won't publish one until I've planned everything up to the time skip.


Writing Tips

In terms of writing I'm open to most stories, but I dislike Self-inserts as I don't want to read about the writer I want to read about the characters, and OC's most of the time, especially when they're related to the main character, as more often then not they're shitty self-inserts and are completely overpowered, and aren't written well either. If you flesh out the characters' backstory make them likable, give them motivations, and flaws they will probably turn out all right though.

You don't have to trust my word but I suggest putting in a moderate, not too much or too little unless something is crucial to the story. Make sure you capture every aspect of a character and don't make them one-dimensional unless that's the point. Use proper formatting so it isn't confusing to read; use "this" for speaking, 'this' for thinking, italicize flashbacks, and if you're skipping time or changing location put a line threw the text and tell either how much time has past or the new location. Make sure to break apart your text into smaller chunks I personally find it really discouraging to read a massive chunk of text. Each line of dialogue should be a paragraph, don't have two people talking in the same paragraph, and change it up; don't just use he/she said, you can change to like the bored boy grumbled or whatever best fits the scene/characters. Also, make sure your chapters aren't too short nor too long, if they're too short they're either boring or confusing to follow. And if you're chapters are too long it gets boring to read.

As for drawing people in, make sure you have a short and effective title, as well as an effective summary. For the title basically sum up what the story will be about in 1-3 words, while not making it sound stupid. For the summary go a bit more in-depth about your story, and keep it at the beginning of the story, as well as hooking the reader and making your story seem interesting.

As for pairings, make sure it makes sense as to why they like each other, don't just throw you're 2 favorite characters together and call it a day, also I personally am not a big fan of incest and in my opinion you shouldn't attempt it unless you know what you're doing, and you can make it good, also incest lemons are even weirder and I'd steer clear of those unless it's within a bigger well-done story.

If you're a write I suggest having a normal schedule to release chapters on, but if you know you can't make it a certain week for whatever reason, tell the people even if a lot of them don't read the author's note. Also if you're not in the proper mood to write don't force yourself or there will be a noticeable drop in quality.

The final thing I will say is don't just leave a story unfinished without stating it, unless you die in real life, in that case, it's probably not your fault.


That's all I feel like writing

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New Game Plus by DuncanIdaho2014 reviews
After a disaster worse than Sabaody, the crew are 'saved' by Vegapunk's experimental time machine. All of the crew is blown back into their past bodies with all of their memories. As Luffy slowly gathers them together again, the world will never be the same. Who wants the same old boring adventure? Screw the plot, and let the chips fall where they may.
One Piece - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 155,996 - Reviews: 2067 - Favs: 6,161 - Follows: 6,205 - Updated: 9/21/2017 - Published: 6/5/2014 - Straw Hats P.
One Piece: LuRo OneShot by LordVishnu reviews
Some time travel stories have Luffy change things. Some have him strive to keep them the same. Enjoy this short LuRo OneShot where he tries to do the latter until he sees no choice but to do the former. Contains a smarter and rather OOC Luffy.
One Piece - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,493 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 94 - Follows: 57 - Published: 7/25/2017 - [Luffy, Robin] - Complete
Warm Memories and Brotherly Bonds by RoseDragonWitch reviews
In the middle of some strange ruins, Luffy disappeared. As the rest of the Straw Hats try to find him, they end up travelling through his memories and are trapped in the past, with no idea to how to get out or how to find their captain. But not all things are meant to be seen… how will they take to seeing what had Luffy been hiding from them?
One Piece - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 64 - Words: 1,514,151 - Reviews: 2290 - Favs: 3,132 - Follows: 1,925 - Updated: 2/26/2016 - Published: 7/15/2013 - Luffy, Ace, Straw Hats P. - Complete
Once again by TheVictor reviews
A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Follow a much stronger, smarter Luffy as he repeats his adventure, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes. Warning: OOC!Luffy, Godlike!Luffy, Smarter!Luffy, LuffyxRobin pairing on the side.
One Piece - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 61 - Words: 154,197 - Reviews: 3088 - Favs: 5,047 - Follows: 4,674 - Updated: 8/13/2013 - Published: 5/19/2013 - Luffy, Straw Hats P.
Second Chance AKA the biggest waste of time in my life reviews
After Luffy and the Straw Hats reach Raftel and the One Piece the Navy uses a Buster Call on Raftel. Everyone Luffy cares about is killed in the attack and as a result, Luffy commits suicide by eating another devil fruit, however, the Sea Devil lets him restart life, except not everything is not the same This is bad I kept it for laughs, but I am working on a GOOD similar story.
One Piece - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 833 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 18 - Published: 6/5 - Complete