Oh, hello... this is HanR's friend again. The above typing is HanR's friend trying to fix a broken key on her keyboard. Just so happens to be the ']' key.

] *click*

Oops. I think I broke it.

] *click*

Umm... so. Anyway, while HanR is totally annoying me with her flute playing, some stuff about her. She plays the flute, she smells weird and is wearing flute earrings. And a white scarf.

And... I'm trying to think of something else about her. She's... a hypocrite! (Sorry, personal joke)

And she's an idiot. But a nice idiot. ^_^

Umm...

She blames her farts on her rabbit, Spencer.

Aned she is very computer-unfriendly.

Okay thats enough Emawee.

Hmm... *corrects grammar*

Okay, that's enough, Emawee.

Well sorryeeeeee! *Farts in Emawee's general direction*

That was Spencer.

Corrects HanR's spelling*

Well, sorryyyyyyy! Or, sorreeeeeee! 'Yeee' just looks weirdo.

you mean just looks "weird"?

No... *corrects self*

'Weird-o'

Corrects HanR*

You mean just looks 'weird'?

Capitals are your FRIENDS ^_^

Now 'E'mily has trotted off to the loo, so I can actually do this BIO properly *sighs* Well I do play the flute and piccolo. I love Orlando Bloom (eeee cute guy), I'm 16 in and in yr 10. I have a crazy arse friend Emily (yes the one on the toliet). I'm obessed with dreams, marshmellows oh and mashi maro. :) Oh and I don't mind story writing either. Oh no shes back. RUN AWAY!!!!!! RETREAT!!!!!!!!

Yup... I'm back. So... *corrects grammar/spelling*

Now 'E' (nice use of capitalization there)mily has trotted off to the loo, so I can actually do this BIO properly *sighs*

I'm thinking it would be more effective if you emphasized the 'PROPERLY' here instead of the BIO, but that's just personal opinion.

Well I do play the flute and piccolo.

Comma after 'well'. See? I'm a proof-reader by day.

I love Orlando Bloom (eeee cute guy), I'm 16 in and in yr 10.

Sixteen in and in year ten? Eh?

I have a crazy arse friend Emily (yes the one on the toliet).

My name got capitalized! Oh, the joy! But, 'yes' should have a comma to indicate a pause. Take a breath. Hold. Hold...

I'm obessed with dreams, marshmellows oh and mashi maro. :) Oh and I don't mind story writing either. Oh no shes back. RUN AWAY!!!!!! RETREAT!!!!!!!!

Obessed? Is that painful? Umm, marshmallows is with an 'a' not 'e' (but I will forgive you because it SOUNDS like 'marshmellow' not 'marshmallow' unless you are a posh English person, not bagging posh English people here) And she's needs an apostrophe. But I do agree with the sentiment of running away. *Runs*

Okay so that concludes my BIO. Have a great day, and don't fall in.
"Only in Kenya"

And I suppose Emily's commentary concludes here too, in HanR's BIO. Wow, this is fun, random capitalization! ^_^ BIO! I ate LUNCH before! It was YUMMMMMY!

Yes Emily... *sighs*