Greetings!

I've been an integral part of a large on-line writers' guild for 12 years. I've used that venue to improve my writing, but along the way I also became very good friends with the majority of the participants. Unfortunately because of those friendships, I felt I wasn't getting unbiased critiques of my work. I decided to make the switch to a fresh venue that would/could make candid comments on the full work, not just the characters I wrote about.

Not here for debates or drama, just want to get some feedback on my work and hopefully provide some reading enjoyment for those that want to read my stuff.

A friend suggested my work looked like I wrote in scenes. So, I'm trying my hand at screen plays and episode work with my favorite shows.

Specifically, I'm working on dialogue flow and characterization.

Let me know how I'm doing!