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Female college student who enjoys well written fanfics. Been a lurker on this site for close to a decade now. But now i'm going to try to be more active, leave more reviews ect.

You know when people say they read to escape the real world? I guess that's kind of the reason why I like to read fanfiction. That's why I'm drawn towards fanfics and fandoms that are impossible in the real world.

I'm admittedly pretty anal when it comes to fanfiction. If it's bad, I'm not going to read it. And most of the stuff on this site is pretty damn bad. It's a stereotype that all fanfiction is poorly written with a weak plot. And it's true- most fanfics are poorly written with a weak plot. But there are a lot of good fics. And even some exceptional ones. Some fanfics on here are way better than some published works I've read.

In my opinion, there are three main things that separate a good fic from a bad fic:

1) Grammar and punctuation.
Having the occasional typo isn't too big of a deal. But when a fic starts out with improper grammar and punctuation every other sentence- I immediately click away.

2) When the author focus on SHOWING the reading, rather than flat out TELLING the reader.
I hear this a lot when it comes to film. But I think it also applies to written work.
Example: "Jane Doe is a 5 foot 3 inch high school girl with medium length blonde hair and blue eyes that wears a black hoodie with blue jeans."- Yeah, that's bad writing.

3) The situation is believable.
Obviously I don't mean this literally. It's fanfiction- none of it is going to be realistic. But a good author can still make something unrealistic seem believable. They can make the reader believe what the character does and feels is realistic. Otherwise, it just takes me out of the story and I just can't continue reading.

Lol I hope that made sense...

Then you have things like writing style and being able to elicit strong emotions from the reader - that separates an exceptional fic from a good fic.

Also, let it be known that I'm a reader and not a writer. So all of this is just my opinion, and I respect everyone who publishes their story on this site. Even if I think your fanfic is awful, you still have my respect for putting your work out there for people to judge. I don't think I'd ever have the balls to do that.

Feel free to PM me! I swear I'm actually nice.

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Take Two by padawanjinx reviews
Everyone knows there are moments that take your breath away and moments you wish would freeze forever. Sideswipe and Sunstreaker are no different. Sometimes, one has to Take Two. A collection of moments/stories that define the twins & their place in the
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 141 - Words: 476,728 - Reviews: 2072 - Favs: 215 - Follows: 175 - Updated: 8/31 - Published: 7/11/2011 - Sideswipe, Sunstreaker
Finding Home by VoodooQueen reviews
Joining the Navy had been an escape. Being recruited into NEST had been a surprise. It's funny how fate works. Jazz. Prowl. SSxOCxSS. Bayverse and elements of other continuities within. See individual chapter notes for warnings.
Transformers - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 49 - Words: 272,821 - Reviews: 1007 - Favs: 801 - Follows: 836 - Updated: 6/18 - Published: 7/21/2016 - [Sideswipe, OC] Ratchet, Jazz
Grow Young with Me by Taliesin19 reviews
He always sat there, just staring out the window. The nameless man with sad eyes. He bothered no one, and no one bothered him. Until now, that is. Abigail Waters knew her curiosity would one day be the death of her...but not today. Today it would give her life instead.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 215,920 - Reviews: 1574 - Favs: 4,128 - Follows: 5,208 - Updated: 2/20 - Published: 3/14/2015 - Harry P., OC
Phantom of Truth by HaiJu reviews
Locked away in a secret government lab with Phantom as her subject, nothing stands between Maddie and the truth... except, perhaps, herself. Complete! Sequel now complete. UPDATE: please read final chapter for post-SoaD event announcements and a deleted scene.
Danny Phantom - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 22 - Words: 66,099 - Reviews: 2352 - Favs: 3,403 - Follows: 1,659 - Updated: 1/15/2018 - Published: 10/19/2011 - Danny F., Maddie F. - Complete
Catechism by Dreamfall reviews
AU The Dursleys taught Harry to fear and hate magic and all things magical including himself. Now how long will it take the wizarding world see the damage done? And can they ever hope to fix it? Disturbing. WIP
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 16 - Words: 113,569 - Reviews: 2195 - Favs: 3,182 - Follows: 3,826 - Updated: 10/17/2017 - Published: 8/11/2004 - Harry P., Severus S.
These Games We Play by Peacewish reviews
For the first time in vorns, Soundwave plays a card game and wins a most unusual prize. But according to Jazz, that's when the real game began. Now master and slave must match wits in a game that will push them both to the breaking point and beyond.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 54 - Words: 325,847 - Reviews: 974 - Favs: 590 - Follows: 545 - Updated: 8/6/2017 - Published: 4/4/2011 - Jazz, Soundwave
Behind The Door by MadnessJones reviews
G1: Sparkplug comes across a deadly secret that the Autobots have kept hidden for millions of years, and now must figure out how to survive when danger and intrigue lurk around every corner. Takes place before the '86 movie.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,204 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 4/26/2017 - Published: 12/2/2016 - Jazz, Ratchet, Daniel W., Sparkplug W. - Complete
Small Fry by TheSarcasticKnight reviews
Babysitting. Debts. Cancer. Living toys? Aimee's life went from pathetically simple to downright ridiculous in the span of a week. Now she has to watch her nephews and niece for two months while their mother is away while also trying to help a group of alien robots get back home. It doesn't seem too hard, but if Wheeljack touches the microwave one more time...
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: M - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 39 - Words: 473,531 - Reviews: 640 - Favs: 395 - Follows: 288 - Updated: 1/3/2017 - Published: 12/2/2014 - Jazz, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker - Complete
Detonation Imminent by Kairos Impending reviews
Peter's trying to figure out how to be a leader. He decides that breaking into the Avengers' base of operations is a good place to start.
Crossover - Avengers & Guardians of the Galaxy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 27 - Words: 64,742 - Reviews: 189 - Favs: 389 - Follows: 304 - Updated: 5/23/2016 - Published: 2/28/2015 - Iron Man/Tony S., Pepper P., Peter Quill/Star-Lord, Rocket R. - Complete
A Day Off by petthekat reviews
Nick and Judy get called into Bogo's office. The conversation that follows is a bit unexpected.
Zootopia - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,466 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 218 - Follows: 65 - Published: 3/30/2016 - [Judy H., Nick W.] Chief Bogo - Complete
Synergy by Agent 0r4ng3 reviews
A freak 'gas-line break' in the local cafe renders her blind and scarred, with no mention of the giant robots that caused the injury. Her brother is hauled in by 'Sector Seven,' whoever they are, for hacking top secret information. A car just kidnapped her, demanding her to take him to his twin brother. Since when does a car have a brother? Sunny/OC/Sides slow-build -COMPLETE-
Transformers - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 55 - Words: 418,129 - Reviews: 1707 - Favs: 960 - Follows: 702 - Updated: 2/11/2015 - Published: 10/3/2012 - Sideswipe - Complete
Transformers: Schism by Vaeru reviews
Sparkbearer Saga: Part II. G1-based AU. Alien invasions, possessed vehicles, language barriers, government conspiracies, family drama, supermarket tabloids, and tomato wars... Welcome to Earth.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 26,694 - Reviews: 658 - Favs: 713 - Follows: 726 - Updated: 11/7/2014 - Published: 10/23/2010 - Sideswipe, Sunstreaker
A Soldier's Work by icanhascamaro reviews
Will has a hard time explaining Ironhide's death to Annabelle. She understands it in a way only a six year old can.
Transformers - Rated: T - English - Family/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,650 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 17 - Published: 12/1/2013 - W. Lennox, Sarah L., Annabelle L., Ironhide - Complete
Stop All the Clocks by Atsadific reviews
The war is ended. But not without cost.
Transformers - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,724 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/17/2013 - Sideswipe, W. Lennox, Annabelle L. - Complete
Quietus by ShyLight reviews
G1: Something went wrong, Sideswipe realized. He just wasn't sure what, and nobody would tell him.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 43,159 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 260 - Follows: 269 - Updated: 4/7/2013 - Published: 2/22/2010 - Sideswipe, Sunstreaker
And Then Nothing by Kitt SummerIsle reviews
Skywarp survives the death of his trine.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,670 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 2/21/2013 - Published: 2/19/2013 - Skywarp - Complete
Mechs and Minibots by TekaWolf reviews
Take organic, add Allspark, end with a very confused Sam, and a slightly disturbed group of Autobots and humans. Who said it would be easy when it was over?
Transformers - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,710 - Reviews: 121 - Favs: 305 - Follows: 369 - Updated: 2/12/2013 - Published: 3/16/2008 - Sam W.
Skyangel by Rose's.wings reviews
G1: They say it takes a village to raise a child, but whoever said that probably didn't count on the 'village' being a gaggle of Autobots. Now Silverbolt and the Aerialbots get to experience the joys and chaos of surrogate parenthood while they try to find the human girl's real family. Of course, no one asked Skyangel if she wanted to leave them in the first place...
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 51,086 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 66 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 1/13/2013 - Published: 10/3/2012 - Silverbolt
A Human Friend by Fire Redhead reviews
Sequel to "A Pet Squishy". Set in AHM universe. As Earth falls and the human race is crushed beneath Decepticon rule, can Thundercracker and Lana's unique friendship endure?
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 23 - Words: 77,768 - Reviews: 494 - Favs: 248 - Follows: 141 - Updated: 5/25/2012 - Published: 8/5/2009 - Thundercracker, Skywarp, Megatron - Complete
Strings of Hope by Mystic Blade reviews
Who says the Poleepkwa don't have human allies? Christopher's quiet entanglement over the years will come in handy as he leaves Earth and begins his search for helping his people and a cure for Wikus. Chris/OC, Wikus/Tania, and Oliver cuteness.
District 9 - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 19 - Words: 264,154 - Reviews: 133 - Favs: 159 - Follows: 84 - Updated: 5/20/2012 - Published: 8/25/2009 - Christopher J., Oliver J. - Complete
Property Of by hydraling110 reviews
During a Cybertronian 'peace,' ex-Cons decide to hide the sentience of and sell humans as pets to secure Earth. Sam and Mikaela might just be the first to grasp the reality of the situation alongside their new mech owner.
Transformers - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 27 - Words: 251,777 - Reviews: 1118 - Favs: 938 - Follows: 855 - Updated: 3/17/2012 - Published: 10/24/2009 - Sam W., Mikaela B.
An Agonizing Secret by multicoloredmango reviews
Mikey tries to hide an injury from his brothers, but soon discovers that it wasn't as harmless as he thought it was...
Ninja Turtles - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 15 - Words: 23,575 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 404 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 2/10/2012 - Published: 5/18/2011 - Michelangelo - Complete
Surface of the Sun by Hearts of Eternity reviews
A look into the lives of the infamous Twins, Sideswipe and Sunstreaker, as they go through the evolution that will take them from younglinghood to the gladiatorial circuit, up to the moment that marked them as Autobots for the rest of their lives.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 34 - Words: 229,063 - Reviews: 814 - Favs: 331 - Follows: 286 - Updated: 1/17/2012 - Published: 1/27/2009 - Sideswipe, Sunstreaker
Story of a lifetime by taralynden reviews
In the long war, every mech had a story. This is just one of them. This is Prowl.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 103 - Words: 265,329 - Reviews: 1562 - Favs: 410 - Follows: 249 - Updated: 12/22/2011 - Published: 1/3/2010 - [Prowl, Jazz] - Complete
Nine Months by sphinx01 reviews
Ratchet embarks on the adventure of his life when he becomes attending physician to a pregnant Carly.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 59,171 - Reviews: 235 - Favs: 224 - Follows: 122 - Updated: 12/1/2011 - Published: 2/10/2010 - Ratchet, Carly W. - Complete
Transformers: Juxtaposition by Vaeru reviews
Sparkbearer Saga: Part I. G1-based AU. A car wreck on a rainy night leads to the oddest partnership imaginable. A disembodied voice, possessed cars, alien robots, kidnapping, rescue, abduction, sparks, keys, and tomato sandwiches... Read if you dare.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 40 - Words: 123,067 - Reviews: 1787 - Favs: 1,477 - Follows: 711 - Updated: 8/2/2010 - Published: 3/30/2007 - Ratchet, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker - Complete
All Mad Here by FanfictionWriter83729 reviews
G1, dark AU, oneshot. Sunstreaker's thoughts on the puzzle that is his ward, the stupidity of humans, the dichotomy of his comrades, and the illusion that is sanity.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,290 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 140 - Follows: 20 - Published: 8/1/2010 - Sunstreaker, Bumblebee - Complete
Instability by Steelfeathers reviews
Post-ROTF. On board the air craft carrier headed back to Diego Garcia, Sam has a slight mental breakdown.
Transformers - Rated: T - English - Angst/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 15 - Words: 188,402 - Reviews: 971 - Favs: 863 - Follows: 798 - Updated: 7/22/2010 - Published: 7/6/2009 - Sam W., Bumblebee
Crossfire and Consequences by Kenya Starflight reviews
When humans are caught in the crossfire of a deadly battle, the consequences are dire for all parties involved...
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,380 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 8 - Published: 6/23/2010 - Bluestreak - Complete
The Lost by The Starhorse reviews
A series of lifechanging events involving Sideswipe and Sunstreaker, told from different points of view. Written in 2002, long before it would become painfully obvious that I could have chosen a better title...
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 80,408 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 308 - Follows: 164 - Updated: 2/9/2010 - Published: 11/28/2007 - Sideswipe, Sunstreaker
A Pet Squishy by Fire Redhead reviews
G1 ish universe. Thundercracker captures a young woman to be his pet
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 41,892 - Reviews: 426 - Favs: 394 - Follows: 134 - Updated: 12/26/2008 - Published: 8/3/2008 - Thundercracker, Skywarp, Soundwave, Starscream - Complete
The Grunt's Guide to Warfare by Tirya King reviews
G1. Some things are universal throughout the galaxy. The rules of warfare being some of them. If you wish to be a proper soldier, you must learn these very important laws and incorporate them throughout your daily life.
Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 27 - Words: 55,044 - Reviews: 338 - Favs: 223 - Follows: 112 - Updated: 4/7/2008 - Published: 6/19/2005
Misadventures of the Mentally Unstable by Melodist reviews
Complete! A drunk and seemingly insane woman somehow manages to find herself in the company of four large, intelligent turtles. Is it just another hallucination, or could these creatures actually be real?
Ninja Turtles - Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 105,893 - Reviews: 215 - Favs: 57 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 7/10/2005 - Published: 4/21/2005 - Complete