Just A Girl With Dreams
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Joined 07-11-11, id: 3064262, Profile Updated: 08-30-11

Hello, I am Just A Girl With Dreams.

Lol, aren't we all?

Ugh, I ment, erm, that people dream!

Yeah, that's what I meant. .

Name: '_' (not going to tell you but you can call me by my username or Nene (knee-knee), my nickname)

I used to have an account a long time ago and forgot about FF .net, but then I remembeed FF .net and tried to remember my password. So intstead, I just made a new one. If that whole sentence confused you, you're not alone buddy.

I just give my honest opinion on stories I know, which is a lot, and just tell you if you have spelling mistakes or you need to be more detailed or if your story is just fine the way it is.


If you want me to be your personal beta, just pm me, and I'll help the best way I can, I'm only 14, but I'm a mature 14 year old who loves reading.

Also, I would have a beta account if I wrote at least 3 stories, but I'm too lazy to update on stories often, so that's why I don't have a beta profile, :( I know sad right? :/

BUT, one of the people that I PM reguarly told me I can start out with one-shots and I was all like O.O, I soo didn't think of that. It's awesome, becuase you don't have to update regularly!! Awesome right?

Though, I might think of just writing a story ahead of time, then just updating it every week so people won't be nagging at me all the time.

I'm still not sure on the whole writing thing yet, but I'll figure it out later :/

Yeah, tried to write a story, but got bored so now I'm just reviewing, YAY!!!


My strong points are:

Spelling/Grammar mistakes (I'm a English freak)

Honest opinions (I will tell you what I think of your story, whether you like it or not, 99% of the time I will like the story)

Detailed opinions (whether or not you were detailed or if you were just fine)

Story plot (I will tell you, a) you need to give more depth into the plot for it to be instersting enough or b) good plot, I look forward to reading more)


My weak points:

Patience (most of the time, I will read the story, but if it's a long chapter, I will read some of it now then the rest later, mind you I am 14 (in a half) and I'm pretty sure I have ADHD ;D)

I do have patience, but, I sometimes get distracted, very easily, or just get frustrated for no reason. But that happens only 7% of the time.

I read any rate of the story like: K, K plus, T, and M (I really don't care, I'm not like some crazy pervert, gosh, I am a mature teenager.)

I can read: Humor, Tradgedy, Adventure, Romance, Horror, Poems, and all the other forms.

So if I you give me a story I don't know, I will read that story just so I can give you my opinion on how it realtes to that story.


Also, if I find a story that's breaking FF .net rules, I will PM you and ask you to change it within a deadline, and if you don't I'll report you.

I will sometimes (all the time) be blunt. A gentle blunt, but blunt netherless.

I can be kind, if I like the stories. If I don't, who cares, it's my opinion about your story. Not everyone has to like your story, gosh.

I really don't like those people who are all like, "If you review, I'll give you a cookie," and crap. What cookie? I don't wan't a cookie. I wan't a brownie.

If you get mad at me for saying a rude review and rant at me, you were mistaken.

You actually thought I'd care :/

Too bad, so sad.

Now, I might come across as mean, but who cares? I am.


Now, do NOT give me a bashing story. I absoutley HATE it when people send me bashing stories.

I don't want to read that. What if that character is my favorite, hm?

And you want me to beta a story where you are bashing on my favorite character?


Type of Stories I Hate:

Corny-sappy-love stories stink. I don't want to read a story where it's sooo sappy and it was 'love at first sight'. What the crap? I don't want to read that.

Rape stories, um, no. I'm a Christian and rape stories? Heck no, PLEASE do not give me a rape story, even if it's a good one.

A corny happy ending. The story cannot have the last sentence saying, "...and they lived happily ever after." NO, make it a GOOD ending and not an ending where a billion other stories used that same conclusion.

A rushed ending is a story where the story is perfectly fine and actually quite good, but the author got lazy and made a rushed ending. When authors do that, I'm all like WTF? This was a perfectly good story and you ruined with that horrible ending. You know what I mean?

When the character is so OOC that I just want to pull my hair. Please, try to give me a story with less OOCness and more In-Character ness. Ok?

When a character is picked (lets say Sakura from the Anime/Manga: Naruto) and the story is changed where the character is so strong and heartless (you know those stories where Sakura is freakishly strong in her genin days and cold; gosh those stories make me mad). Do not give me those stories, I really don't like them.


Types of Stories I ABSOUTLEY Love:

Action with a dash of romance. I LOVE stories where the Hero/Heroin goes on this epic adventure and the story ends with day saved, love interest is with them, the dream is acclompished, but not with a too corny ending. You probably know I hate that.

Tradegy stories where the Hero's/Heroin's love interest dies and they go on this adventure to get over said love perosn-type-thingy and not wallow in their self pity. I'm a sucker for sad stories.

Where the story is set back in the beginning and their all kiddy-like and cute!! I love those stories where their so ADORABLE!!


Anime stories I've read and/or watched:

Naruto

Inuyasha (kind of, didn't really get into it)

Books/Movies I've read and/or watched:

Twilight Saga

Morganville Vampires

Mortal Instruments

The Giver

Pretties

Uglies

Specials

Extras

The Weaver

Pirates of the Carribean

Harry Potter

The Host

Pride and Prejudice

Sense and Sensibilty

Blue Bloods

Vampire Kisses

13 Reasons Why

Lord of the Rings

Percy Jackson and the Olympians

Maximum Ride

The Lovely Bones

Chronicles of Narnia

Sherlock Holmes

House of Night

Alice in Wonderland

Nancy Drew

Coraline

To Kill A Mockingbird

Chronicles of Vladimir Todd

Bridge to Terabithia

Tuck Everlasting

Wicked Lovely

Beka Cooper Series

Immortals

Dear John

Fallen series

Winnie-the-Pooh (can't wait for it to come out in theatres!!)

Last Song

Transformers

Truth About Forever

A Child Called It

Goose Girl

Marley & Me

Matilda

Once Upon a Marigold

Avatar: The Last Airbender

I, Alex Cross

The Blind Side

Shiver

Holes

Island of the Blue Dolphins

Number the Stars

The City of Ember

Anne Frank: The Fiary of a Young Girl

A Series of Unfortunare Events

Beastly

My Blood Approves

Breach of Trust

...and many, many more that I can't think off the top of my head right now. I will probably put more and more books I remember reading every now and then :)

Tv Shows:

House

Wizards of Waverly Place

That 70's Show

Good Luck Charlie

iCarly

True Jackson VP

Regular Show (YEAH-YUH!! lolz, only die-hard watchers of this show know that)

Adventure Time

Switched at Birth

Lost

Stargate Universe (heck ya I'm a nerd for this show!! XD)

Victorious

Spongebob

and again, many, many more I could'nt think of the top of my head...

Video Games:

Anything with action, blood, and violence, lolz


I really don't like the, "Are you human?" thing that FF .net does. I mean eveytime I see that I'm all like, "No, I'm a purple ostrich from outerspace who came to take over your world with my reviews. Fear me!!" Really, really? Come on...


Call me irrseponsible and I'd say...yeah, you're pretty much right. XD

Shout out to my haters!! You make me awesome! XD


;D Anyways, thanks for whatever you did, and a big "F you" for the people that ticked me off for some reason, have a nice day!

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New Blood by artemisgirl reviews
Sorted into Slytherin with the whisper of prophecy around her, Hermione refuses to bow down to the blood prejudices that poison the wizarding world. Carving her own path forward, Hermione chooses to make her own destiny, not as a Muggleborn, a halfblood, or as a pureblood... but as a New Blood, and everything the mysterious term means. ((Short chapters, done scene by scene))
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Awake: Create by 7th Creature reviews
Before the sealing process, the Yondaime Hokage encounters a problem. There's only one solution to putting an end to the fox demon's rampage. What damage could one more Jinchuuriki possibly do? Oh, boy. DISCONTINUED.
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cabbage patch by paws-bells reviews
ItaSaku Non-Massacre AU. Their story began long before anyone could realize it. The story of a little pink-haired girl child, and a stoic young boy.
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The Eyes Have It by Shana the Short reviews
[FANOWRIMO CHALLENGE] Most people seem to think that developing a doujutsu is a wondrous, unspeakably lucky occurrence. Considering that she now has to deal with an ability she has no idea how to use, family drama, fashion crises, and the world's most rude and vulgar doctor, on top of getting to know her new genin team just after graduation...needless to say, Sakura begs to differ.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 30 - Words: 62,069 - Reviews: 1347 - Favs: 4,122 - Follows: 1,675 - Updated: 12/12/2012 - Published: 10/31/2012 - Sakura H. - Complete
The Chronicles of Courting One Uzumaki Naruto by andReiki reviews
'In order to escape the self-proclaimed tag of being a socially stunned, suicidal emo; I, Uchiha Sasuke, decided to start this journal. Hoping it will make me luckier in my attempts. Whoever is reading this and yes Itachi, I'm on to you- die in my misery. For these are the chronicles of courting one Uzumaki Naruto- my best friend and the love of my life.' AU, OOC, BL and crack.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 11,472 - Reviews: 124 - Favs: 217 - Follows: 105 - Updated: 11/23/2012 - Published: 8/27/2012 - [Sasuke U., Naruto U.] - Complete
The Philosophy of Self by TaikoHawk reviews
They told him he was Sasuke. Was he mad to believe they were wrong? Optional sequel now up
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Freedom in the Eyes of Another by Oroburos69 reviews
The Wave Mission was a failure. They got caught, captured, taken-it didn't end well. Now Sakura has a half-heard order, uncut fingernails, and more desperation than bravery. One way or another, she's getting Team Seven out today. Complete.
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The Last Will and Testament of Uzumaki Naruto by BlushingLotus reviews
Naively manipulated into believing his death may be imminent, Naruto starts to enforce his will while he's still alive… much to Sasuke and Sakura's dismay. Slightly AU since Sasuke has returned. Rated for language and lemon SasuSaku
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Shades of Grey by Lady Hanaka reviews
Sakura knew that Sasuke would hate her when she brought him back to Konoha, but she was willing to let him do so, as long as he came back. She hoped she could save him from his darkness...but more than that, she hoped he could save her from her own.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 26 - Words: 145,103 - Reviews: 2552 - Favs: 2,586 - Follows: 1,130 - Updated: 10/4/2008 - Published: 6/12/2007 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Garden of Sanctuary by Nes Mikel reviews
AU: Oneshot. An alternate ending to Naruto. The Heavens describe the Garden a peaceful paradise. The Hells describe the Garden a baneful prison. In here... which is it?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,149 - Reviews: 616 - Favs: 1,752 - Follows: 302 - Updated: 4/8/2006 - Published: 2/2/2006 - Naruto U., Sakura H. - Complete