12-30-2011

I only seek to comment on stories published on this site and make suggestions to improve them.

My first suggestion to members of the site: make your profile look professional with complete sentences.

The best piece of fan fiction that I have gone over on this site would be Lynxara's Mobile Battalion Gundam Wars. She is obviously a professional writer. The concept of such a crossover of this is very intriguing to me due the appearance of only one Marvel character and one that can surprise the characters from Gundam. I prefer crossovers similar to this, where the character(s) from one source are capable to surprise or scare characters from other sources.

I would like to see a quality Bionicle/Kingdom Hearts crossover. Bionicle has long been a hobby/favorite of mine. I have never played any of the video games in the Kingdom Hearts franchise, but I have researched it and I find it to be very interesting. All of the Kingdom Hearts crossovers I have read are range from poorly to almost okay. They usually involve too many characters and some of very cheesy and/or misfit characters; an example of this would be Kingdom Hearts: Sonic Version. The story's writing was alright, but Sonic being in the same fictional universe as characters from Dragon Ball Z just doesn't jive with me.

The way that I would to see a Bionicle/Kingdom Hearts crossover be written would have the creatures from Bionicle shock the characters (not electric shock) from Kingdom Hearts initially and the Bionicle universe function differently than the worlds in Kingdom Hearts games (i.e., no "hearts" like in KH games, Bionicle characters cannot lose their hearts, etc.). Additionally, I would like to see Makuta Teridax fill the role of the big bad. If you think you are a quality writer and are willing to take this up, send me a private message and I'll give you some of the ideas that I would have for such a story. I'm just not much of a writer nor am I satisfied by writing.

04-29-2012

I would like to say that crossovers between Marvel Comics and Final Fantasy (VII is the only one I am really familiar with) look interesting. Destinies Entwining is well written and I like the concept behind it. The concept of the lifestream in Final Fantasy VII is neat, but it doesn't feel like it should be a major source of power in certain kinds of crossovers, so it shouldn't be connected to beings not of the Final Fantasy VII canon. In a crossover with Marvel, I would suggest that the lifestream be manipulable by powerful characters or objects (i.e., Thanos with the Infinity Gauntlet wins in a fight against a FFVII character using Mako energy).

Distant Worlds, Broken Souls is really interesting and I cannot wait to learn how Sephiroth and Zack ended up on Dak'tar IV and what its relation is to "the Planet".

06-26-2012

Wand and Shield is written by Morta's Priest and is a crossover between Harry Potter and the Avengers. Most Harry Potter stories sound like they have been written by a 14 year old girl who doesn't understand the first thing about run on sentences or capitilizing proper nouns. This story is not like that. It uses the entire Marvel Cinematic Universe and is still taking off. The interesting parts come about with Harry's interaction with Director Fury and S.H.I.E.L.D. I like reading how characters in crossovers are bewildered, surprised, and/or amazed by those from other stories. Harry has already surprised Fury and his agents have a hard time dealing with him. Likewise, Harry has been astonished by the Hulk and Tony Stark's arc reactor. Thor, Loki, the Tesseract, and the Chitauri are going to do that as well. I am checking in every day for updates on the story.