I am certainly not sorry.

You're only here because I've written something you don't like. Too fucking bad. If you had the sense not to butcher the English language with your mockery of fiction then I would not have been forced to leave a caustic review, which I'm sure you find offensive.

Grammar is not an option; it is an necessity. It creates ease of comprehension and allows for productive discourse. If you could not be bothered to find a beta or use spell check then for shame. You cannot possibly think you write well; someone(s) has misled you and I shake my head at them as well.

There are three forms of there: there, they're and their. 'It's' is not a possessive and 'its'' is not a word. A semi-colon separates two sentences with complementary themes; a comma separates one independent clause from a dependent one. Capital letters are reserved for beginnings of sentences and should not be used as a font. There are more, and honestly I'm not being fickle. I care about the reputation of fan fiction Stories like yours are making this community look as if it is composed of toddlers with keyboards. The standards should be higher.

Please, stop writing. I'm asking nicely.

I wish you the best of luck,

tHobbes