I'm not a guy of many words, so i'll just get to the point. There's a difference from being helpful in pointing out flaws in my storie, and then there's outright insulting me for it. If you're going to flame me, at least try to be kind. I'm a beginner after all. Ifyou would be so kind as to do that, I'd be very grateful. Arigatou Gozaimasu! :) First story will be put up around summer. PLease, would someone help me with that one.